Needs more sex and less macho violence. Fun to read but seemed to lack a dynamic sense of realism, had a surrealistic 50's feel.
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Anonymous01/28/10
NEED MORE OF THESE KIND OF STORIES
WOODMANONE;
I THOUGHT IT WAS EXCELLENT. WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT WAS THERE WAS SEX WITHOUT STEP BY STEP INSTRUCTIONS. I ALSO LIKE THE THE FACT THE GUY WAS A MAN, NOT SOME WIMP LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES I SEE LATELY. IF A GUY DOES NOT STAND UP FOR WHAT IS HIS, NO ONE ELSE WILL, AND HE GOES INTO A FREE FALL. HE DOES NOT NEED TO WIN THE FIGHT ONLY STAND UP FOR WHAT IS HIS.
It is a shame how easy it is to lose what could have turned into an institution!
The problem was obvious from the beginning, the two of them solved all the problems and everyone else was along for the ride. At the time everyone was greatful because they knew what it was like to not have anything, the new generation only knew about having and then they decided to improve the bottom line and use their autonomy to ignore the rules. The result is that it all went back to nothing. I really hope that our hero has learned something from this and will involve others in raising his kids, and give them space for their own participation!
Your story emphasizes the fact that there still are many great young people in our society. Not everyone is a useless bum.
Two nice, young people find each other and, at least for now, a wonderful relationship. Even if it is just a story, I believe those values still exist out there.
Thank you, Woodman.
Once again, I feel like we are sitting around a table, over coffee, and I'm listening-
Your stories have the knack of making me feel we are one on one, reminiscing about old times. Especially this one. I spent a year at Harris, a hundred years ago.
May we have another one please. Great story, well written with strong characters and a story of life, love and loss. Thanks for a story so well told I would like another one please.
I've read a number of your stories and every one I've read has been above average. Even though they were non-erotic, they had enough action, suspense, and a hint of eroticism. I think I could have given most of them the high-side of a 5-rating. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous01/28/10
As usual
A well done, entertaining story. Wish you would write more.
the lack of drugs. Hard to believe a post 68 frat without a bong.Good read anyway,but I had way more fun at "The Zoo" (Umass), during the 70's,Woodman!-Thanks for the story.
Being a Dad is the greatest job on earth. The time and care for our sons and daughters is an investment in the pearl of great price. Nothing is more valuable then being good parents to our children and providing loving guidance as they grow into adulthood.
Good, I Guess.
Needs more sex and less macho violence. Fun to read but seemed to lack a dynamic sense of realism, had a surrealistic 50's feel.
NEED MORE OF THESE KIND OF STORIES
WOODMANONE;
I THOUGHT IT WAS EXCELLENT. WHAT I LIKED ABOUT IT WAS THERE WAS SEX WITHOUT STEP BY STEP INSTRUCTIONS. I ALSO LIKE THE THE FACT THE GUY WAS A MAN, NOT SOME WIMP LIKE SO MANY OTHER STORIES I SEE LATELY. IF A GUY DOES NOT STAND UP FOR WHAT IS HIS, NO ONE ELSE WILL, AND HE GOES INTO A FREE FALL. HE DOES NOT NEED TO WIN THE FIGHT ONLY STAND UP FOR WHAT IS HIS.
PLEASE KEEP WRITING.
Delightful little story
It is a shame how easy it is to lose what could have turned into an institution!
The problem was obvious from the beginning, the two of them solved all the problems and everyone else was along for the ride. At the time everyone was greatful because they knew what it was like to not have anything, the new generation only knew about having and then they decided to improve the bottom line and use their autonomy to ignore the rules. The result is that it all went back to nothing. I really hope that our hero has learned something from this and will involve others in raising his kids, and give them space for their own participation!
Nice story
Your story emphasizes the fact that there still are many great young people in our society. Not everyone is a useless bum.
Two nice, young people find each other and, at least for now, a wonderful relationship. Even if it is just a story, I believe those values still exist out there.
Thank you, Woodman.
Once again, I feel like we are sitting around a table, over coffee, and I'm listening-
Your stories have the knack of making me feel we are one on one, reminiscing about old times. Especially this one. I spent a year at Harris, a hundred years ago.
Put another log on the Fire.
May we have another one please. Great story, well written with strong characters and a story of life, love and loss. Thanks for a story so well told I would like another one please.
Thank You
You weave a good story
I've read a number of your stories and every one I've read has been above average. Even though they were non-erotic, they had enough action, suspense, and a hint of eroticism. I think I could have given most of them the high-side of a 5-rating. Keep up the good work.
As usual
A well done, entertaining story. Wish you would write more.
A good story, but slow to get started
Still, a good read and enjoyable.
The 50's feel is explained by....
the lack of drugs. Hard to believe a post 68 frat without a bong.Good read anyway,but I had way more fun at "The Zoo" (Umass), during the 70's,Woodman!-Thanks for the story.
Being a Dad is the greatest job on earth.
Being a Dad is the greatest job on earth. The time and care for our sons and daughters is an investment in the pearl of great price. Nothing is more valuable then being good parents to our children and providing loving guidance as they grow into adulthood.
Side note...
Remember, this was based on a true story and it could not be too long ago with the use of the electronic locks.
brilliant he was a true man stopping an arseole from rape and defending his woman
Thank you
I loved your story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
good'un
better than your average
Sometimes Karma works -
A good man, a good woman, and a good story thanks -
Nice story but pregnant to early in life
Most kids wait to build a nest egg and then start a family.
excellent story, especially the no drug policy.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
Good. Clean. Story
Really enjoyed the story. 5. Stars and will be in my favorites
Ron
cowboyridecc@.com
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