by cowboy109
Y'know, I'm usually the kind of person to take a story and read it in its own context--whether it's good or bad doesn't even enter my mind until a while after I've read it, if at all.
Now, that being said...this has got to be the biggest piece of cockamamie bullshit that I have ever read on this site. I've read bad stories, but this is nuclear. The premise is stupid, the characterization is nonexistent, it's not sexy, and for a story based around nonconsent, the main character you chose seems to consent to it rather happily.
I'm sorry; I know I'm not supposed to be this harsh and blatant and critical, but...I feel pretty damn strongly about this.