Magic Words

wow

so you're still alive huh?

I liked it... a fun romance where she finally realized what she needed and actually went back to try and gain it back.

Keep writing man... we miss you here

Loved the story

But it irritated me that circumstances stopped them being together in this way for the amount of time they were separated. Also, I'm a firm believer that a persons true character is determined during a 'crunch time' situation.

In my mind Sharon will turn on Eric again during a spontaneous but critical moment. Exactly at the time their bond should save them. I personally wouldn't risk staying with her.

Great to see you back!

They were both very tough and objective. She wanted to be responsible for those she loved and make a difference, while he wanted to keep her in this world. Lesser people would hate each othere after all that happened. But they are looking to the future.

Love Your Writing

Great to read something new, you really have talent, thanks.

Great story

from one of the best authors on this site.

Great to read you again.

Very good story, but I wouldn't expect less. Your work is always welcome. I have only one request : more. Thanks. Paul

You Know

All of us who know you will be thinking you're turning into an old softy with your ability to tell stories like this. Outstanding--- yes more.

I thought it was well planned and executed. You were right, of course--

writing is not always easy, but I feel you had fun, too. Rightfully so, as this is another very good piece. Thanks for a few moments of enjoyment reading it.

Loved the Story

But I can't help but wonder why the house blew up?

Sad...........but

It was sad that Sharon lost most of her family but this is also where you find out who will be there for you.

Sharon was lucky to have her brother and sister in law and she was lucky Eric didn't go after someone else. So there is a strong bond there. Something happening like that can destroy a person and any relationship or after some time it can make it stronger.

Very well written.

Shorty

been a while !!!

your one of the best writers on this site ! please don't make us wait so long for the next story!

Missed your irony, wit and passion. Thanks. We needed that.

W,

Not easy to put feelings in the written word. Welcome back and please....write on.

x

Boring...

But I guess that's why it was filed under "romance". Would have liked it better if something interesting or erotic had happened. Do they really have co-ed dorms where males and females share a room these days?

Rivals O Henry and Poe

Your mastery of the short story rivals O Henry and Poe. Publish them in a book. This was suggested by another commentator on another of your stories. How many Literoticans agree?

Read a previous comment...

from someone who liked your story. So I took a chance and read it, too. Great theme--boy gets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl again. Even though it's a tried and true motif, you've added some twists that kept it interesting. I really enjoyed it.

Great!

What a tear jerker but at least there is a happy ending. Great story.

Nice Story!

I liked the way you built up the story line, and my only complaint is the spelling errors. Do you have an editor?
if not get one.

Thanks for the story.

Good?

Yes, you did! This was well written, and I liked it. Keep writing, and,
Thank you for sharing!

Nice

Very sweet story. I enjoyed reading it tremendously. Don't stop writing. You have a wonderful talent.

You do have a very romantic soul -

At least it seems that way -

I wish you were still writing - but will enjoy what you lkeft us -

Disappointed

I've read several of your stories now and enjoyed their depth. This was a disappointment - too shallow, too quick. I felt I owed you for a 4-star vote since I enthusiastically gave you 5 stars for the other of your works that I've read.

Thanks for your contributions.

VisualPerv

Very nice: 5*****

Thank you. tom anon

cute and romantic

the middle was a bit dramatic but realistic.
nice ending.

More please.