by PurpleThread
Left me wanting more! Are there plans to add additional chapters to this storyline?
Some of us like build-up, and if your instinct was to have more before you got to the sex I think you should have run with that. The basic concept of the story is sound, and I did enjoy it.
The story written well and gave sight as if you were reading the doctors true notes. I would of loved to been the test subject with her.
... but also sad and depressing - and NOT really erotic, since the sex in this story is more or less rape.
Would have been nice if it had been tagged properly as nonconsent/rape. I mean, who doesnt love going from 'throb' to 'sob', RIGHT?