A Vibrating Kind of Valentine's Day

Funny

I think this should of been in the humor section. It's a good laugh and he is a joke. Not bad, not bad at all.

Slug

I mean this in a positive way as I'm sure you meant to create a monster in your tale, but reading it left with the sense that I had just eaten a slug. I don't even want to think whether such a character might exist because I'm frightened they might.

fantasy

someone else doing the house work is the ultimate turn on. i found this humorous.

This sounds so pathetic it must be real. I kept reading hoping it would get better but it ends just like I suspected it would. Funny story.

hot story

That was a hot story with a touch of humour.Why not isn't sex supposed to be fun

Hilarious

This is one of the most hilarious stories I have ever read. I just couldn't stop laughing. I'm still chuckling as I'm writing this comment. Thank you for the laugh. Please write more funnies.

A GREAT LAUGH I MUST SAY

this was so funny you wrote this like you where talking to him. it really had me smiling brilliant well done.

That was funny as hell

I have a job and do all the cleaning, laundry, grocery shopping, and most of the cooking. I'm the perfect man for you. I forgot to tell you I'm married. Bigamy is no big deal, right?

Seriously, you have a great way with words.

How would classify this story?

Appropriately entered as a Valentine's Day story it has been suggested it would fit into humor & satire and I would agree with this if it didn't strike of so much reality it would probably better fit in erotic horror. This may be how the author developed some of her attitude. This is not to suggest that attitude is a bad thing, because hers is special. Another story deserving critical acclaim.