I really like this story! And I'm particularly fond of Taryn. She's a character that many people, my self included, can surely relate to. Keep writing. You've definitely piqued my interest.
This is mysterious and funny and a whole bunch of other things a love
story should have. I never have an issue with length of first chapters, but
you are teasing. Like Cydney's following his feelings. So many men back
away in instances where opportunity presents itself.
This is why I love fiction..... anything is possible.
English
no errors. i think?
and keep on going with this sweet story.
A great start!
I really like this story! And I'm particularly fond of Taryn. She's a character that many people, my self included, can surely relate to. Keep writing. You've definitely piqued my interest.
Thanks for continuing the story
I am looking forward to reading more.
*****
Excellent. You are very talented, 2CHaNces. A natural born writer, it appears.
Loved the dialogue, especially between Taryn and her brothers.
Love it!
I can't wait for you to continue! Great story!
Intriguing
This is mysterious and funny and a whole bunch of other things a love
story should have. I never have an issue with length of first chapters, but
you are teasing. Like Cydney's following his feelings. So many men back
away in instances where opportunity presents itself.
This is why I love fiction..... anything is possible.
I like him!!!
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