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by Anonymous

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by chytown03/07/14

Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

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by tazz31703/07/14

WHEN SOMETHING IS THOUGHT OF

could it ever be forgotten and put away. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by 9pool05/30/14

Gave it 5 Stars

Because it was so gripping. But I have to agree with the other commenters. This is not a happy ending. Their relationship problems have not been addressed. The trust issue will always be there, as will the issue that she only married him because of a promise intended to ease her concerns. Her obsession is not healthy and not likely to resolve itself without some attempt at satisfaction and she has clung desperately to his promise in an effort to justify her behavior. That's not an epiphany she will suddenly arrive at on her own. Perhaps years later she may see it in hindsight, but even that is not likely.

So this story could have been better. It should have either finished as a "consequences" tale or had them get together and address the elephant in the room. I suspect you avoided this because you did not know how to address it without killing the marriage and for that reason I probably should not be giving you 5 stars, but I did.

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by Depopulo06/26/14

self cuck and anything thats self cuck is 1-5.... oh and you good sir author are a usless fuckwit

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by KarenE07/16/14

@Depopulo

How in the world is this self cuck?

He fought as hard as he could, I think it was obvious he wasn't going to stay if she did do it.

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by KarenE07/16/14

Finally A LW Wife Who Gets It!

So many of these moronic wives have no idea that any normal man is NOT going to accept his wife fucking another man, "Get Out Of Jail Free Card" or not.

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by IGotYurWife07/16/14

Stressful read - palpable tension

Great read. Once again you got me infuriated and anxious. I felt his angst, regret and sense of impending marital loss. Took me right to the edge and then pulled me back.

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by ErotFan09/10/14

Best of the lot, plot-wise

Cilla was right. Anne really was on his side! :o)

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by looking4it10/06/14

Two things, I honestly believe she did it and Friday night was a "brilliant" way to throw him off. Just saying, the way you set her up as this self centered single minded slut-to-be, I dint see her giving up. Regardless, I don't think either of them realize right now what this has done to their relationship.

Second thought (argument?): I assume at the wedding SHE made a promise to him in front of friends and family. So, as a person who is so fundamentally committed to keeping promises, which is most important...the secret promise he made to her or the public promise she made to him...

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by Pappy710/29/14

I think she did it , too.

She spent too much time planning all of it. For years she had been mentioning it to her friend. She kept it from her husband because she knew he wouldn't like it, promise or not. It was all just an elaborate plan and she pulled it off brilliantly. But she is such a stupid cow that at sometime she will throw it in his face, how she did it and it didn't change anything. But it already had. After all the drama that she put him through and the stubborn disregard for his feelings, she had already killed the foundation of their marriage and all it was going to take was one little snipe that she had already proven she was capable of hitting him with. And what about doing the deed with someone she works with. Everyone she works with will know what she has done and of course when asked about it by the "girls" at work she will bleat loudly about the promise and every time they go to a work function he will be the laughing stock of the party. And of course, the man she "experiences" will think her husband is a wimp and smirk and make remarks so he'll have that to contend with. Divorce is in their future and it is going to be a bloody mess, maybe literally. He would have saved a lot of trouble and heart ache if he would have just let the self-centered bitch go before the wedding. Then he could have gotten with Anne who would have stayed true to him and wifey could have fucked her brains out getting to "feel" another man.

Well written, but I hope the author doesn't really know any people like these. Would be sad, stupid people are not fun to be around.

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by cap535611/05/14

story

something that seems to be forgotten here is that she went into the marriage with the idea that she had one chance for fling. so if he wouldn't have made that promise would she still have married him? seems she forgot that fact in her thinking

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by xtchr11/25/14

Made Me Think!

Boy, did this story make me think. I think this guy brought it all on himself. If a girl dBoy, did this story make me think. I think this guy brought it all on himself. If a girl doesn't want to marry you, so be it, move on. When you have to talk a girl into marrying you with promises of a 'get out of jail' card, you are not going to have much of a marriage. He should have just moved on and let her get all the experience she wanted-without him.
When she brought up the promise, years later, he should have said, OK, I forgive you but it's time to say good bye. He had the right idea, but it just came to late.
I also think that she had already cheated on him, she had too much time invested in her plans to just drop them. The Friday night cancelled date was part of her scheme to get away with it.

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by Tootight101/03/15

loved it

very nicely done. like a guy that's only had one woman. I really liked this story, the mechanics worked well. a wife gives you a get out of jail free card, you tell her and see the hurt, what do you do? she made the right choice, but darn sure took her a long time to see the hurt she was causing.

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by carvohi02/18/16

Am I feeling a sense of chagrin...

I guess that's the right word. I thought I'd read all BT's stories; then this popped up on the random section. I checked it and realized I missed it. Jeepers, am I glad I got to read it.

Two things I especially liked:

Cilla bailed on the infidelity at the end. I admit she had me going. I thought for sure this marriage was in the toilet.

Second, I do enjoy the idiosyncrasies of every day language in England. Lately I've been watching Doc Martin, and I find it a very warm series. I like that word - arse.

Thanks for a good one. Sorry for the late comment.

Jedd Clampett

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by betrayedbylove04/13/16

You Know

Despite her deciding not to go through with the deed, it seems there's going to be a lot of dialogue between them in the near future. Luckily this is fiction, because that conversation will never take place.
Just me being nuts.

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by telboy1704/24/16

Great Story - Careful what you wish for/promise.

You can't blame her - She wanted him to honour his promise. Great twist when he said he would honour it by forgiving her but not necessarily be able to stay in love with her.
In her favour she realised herself that she couldn't go through with it. Her own love for him trumped her desire for another man.

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by DrKenStone05/26/16

Consequences - His wife is a child acting childish

Having sex with someone other than her husband is part of a greater sin. The sin of betrayal includes, forcing him to make the promise in the first place, marrying him while holding out hope of a sexual encounter with another, lusting after others and lastly tormenting her poor husband. He would be better off with someone that was in love with him not this mentally unbalance child he married.

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by silentsound10/10/16

Didn't really care for the stupid bitch

Or how wimpy the cuckold husband was behaving.

He should have played her stupid game and left her to her own devices while he went out screwing around on her and see how much she liked it then.

Or exposed her stupid ass to all their family and friends to explain why the divorce was occurring and to show the courts proof of her neglect and cruelty towards her family.

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by TonyKiwi12/18/16

Don't

write cheques you don't want cashed, especially post dated ones. TK

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by MaFrepler02/11/17

Overly long

Good story. Realistic. Good character. The problem I had was with the flashback to how they met and leading up to their marriage. It wasn't necessary and it took away from the narrative flow,and the drama of her asking him to keep the promise.

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by Venustas07/20/17

Church Vow Trumps

Cilla had religious beliefs and given the mention of bridesmaids it would have been a church wedding. Now a church wedding ceremony includes vows made before God, which include 'forsake all others'.

Surely for a religious person, a church vow would trump a prior ordinary promise! Therefore the promise is null and void. In any case the promise was to 'forgive one slip-up'; there was nothing about forgiving a planned extracurricular copulation.

There has been speculation in previous comments as to Cilla having already done the deed. I would say given Cilla's aversion to lying and cheating, I conclude she hasn't.

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by 1WiseSage08/23/17

Who Broke Their Vows???

The husband did!!! He cheated his wife!! He promised her one free fuck after she married him. That was part and parcel of his marriage vows. If he was ANY kind of man, he would have stood behind his promise. But clearly, he is nothing other than a liar, a cheat and a back-stabber. Rot in hell you low-life, piece of shit!!!

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by DetroitRockCity08/23/17

Damnit, you had me spitting nails to the end! LOL Excellent ending!

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by 266xxyz08/26/17

Mostly like your stuff...

This was well written (as usual) and had me at the end of my chair but sorry I didn't like the ending. Not that there was anything wrong with it.

For me, the trust was broken the minute she brought it up. I guess I'm impulsive. Wouldn't matter how long we'd been married. On reflection, MAYBE I could have dealt with it the early part of our marriage but certainly not after kids and all those yrs. I do understand her dilemma but also understand his. Gotta man up and keep your promise. I would have...did with my ex...to forgive. To me that means I would let her live. No way to forget. And as he said he didn't promise to love her afterwards and I think that is a valid argument. I'm sure many of you would see that differently. IDC. It would have been over for me. Sickness health forsake etc. it appears he kept his vows...and his promise. She chose, at the end to keep hers but as far as I can see she broke the trust. It will build even more as life goes on and eventually she will cheat...and in a sense I don't blame her but again a promise is a promise. It is her choice to keep or break those vows and I believe it will happen and maybe even once just so she can see and I'm sure compare.....which would be inevitable.

In a relationship, once you start to fuk each other things do change. No matter how well she hides it he will know she cheated and it will change their relationship for the worst. She also said "Once". to fuk another man. In this scenario she wants to wine and dine and be romantic. That was not part of the deal. It appears to me that she wanted to have an affair, not just a quick fuk to see what it was like. Be wined and dined etc. It could very well be that she would want to keep a lover and not just stop after she found out what it was like to be with another man. Anyway I look at it that is what I see. Ok..I promised but didn't promise afterwards. For Give? Well I mentioned that above. After all those years and children then this...I would have ended it. Who can define forgive? Forgetting would be out of the question. Once the bell rings it cannot ever un-ring.. It would hurt too much and I wouldn't be able to live with her under those conditions. Never trust her again. I know from personal experience that no matter the past you can start over... It's going to hurt but it can be done. With me it took about 5 yrs before I could get close again. Being numb for 5 yrs is not pleasant but I did thaw and have some one in my life again and I’m happy.

Obviously you done good Brit. Your story got to me and that’s is the point isn't it? Art is to affect. You accomplished your goal..at least I think that was your goal. In any case 5*s.

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by 266xxyz08/26/17

Another thought

Possibly they could have had a 3 way thing. That maybe would satisfy the promise and they would not have to split up...?

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by Schwanze112/08/17

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She gave you the free pass. You are out. Run away, run away you dumb ass!

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by Schwanze112/08/17

and

now you made kids with her. Damn. You are so fucked now.

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by Schwanze112/08/17

page 2

I could have done it then. I can't do it now. You and I are through. Feel free to fuck the whole navy. I'm out.

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by Schwanze112/08/17

Well I guess his patience paid off

Doubt I'd ever feel the same about her. Probably just fuck her till the kids moved out.

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by Pappy701/03/18

It was never said that he gave her a "free fuck"

card, he just said he would forgive her. He already told her during her totally stupid rant that he would forgive her but that it would change their relationship and that he didn't know if he could love her or even live with her afterwards. I also think Anne would have been a better choice for him, hell anyone would have been better than that stupid cow. Someone as obstinate as she was would not have given up, ever and when the selfish pig got her free dick, she would have felt entitled to another and then another, ad nauseum. Moral of the story is: if you have to promise your fiancé she can screw someone else, sometime in the future, don't marry her. If she freaks out that badly, run Forrest, run.

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by MaxiMilf04/22/18

No way

If my husband even just mentioned the idea, my bags would be packed and I'd be gone!

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