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Riley's Bar Ch. 05

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by C_frommn01/30/10

Finally

Elaine and Do Process will be interesting to see where everything goes from Here. They can only throw him in jail and Hold him for so long before letting him Loose at least he wont have to worry about hurting anyones Feelings.

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by digdaddyrich01/30/10

An interesting development

Well he sure as hell won't have to decide who he's going to fuck now.

A really good full story. A lot of background that makes the characters come to life. Well done and thanks for the good read.

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by bruce2201/30/10

Good Story

Our hero was snatched from the horns of dilemma, by the long arm of
the Law!

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by Koreavet01/30/10

Wheels within wheels

I think we have two different stories jammed together. That may be why the editing slipped.

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by sexmate02/01/10

Well That was interesting.

Let's see where this heads. And what dilemas this predicament brings up an and what happens to the problem on the 23!
Thanks for writing

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by DWornock07/01/11

Another 1*

Except for the last several sentences all it was is more boring bar relationships that add nothing to the story.

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by betrayedbylove02/04/14

Damn

You know up until the last line of the tale it was becoming a soap opera but now my curiosity is peaked. I have an idea what the future holds but I won't speculate yet. Still time...

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by Drbeamer333309/02/14

The last scene was interesting. Thanks for the offering.

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by fanfare12/16/14

Hows that old saying go?

Rob's not going to fuck anyone,
cause in jail,
he's the one who gets fucked!

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by Anonymous08/31/15

Well it took them long enough to catch up with him!

Guess that solves his friday dilemma.

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