Reunion Ch. 03

Great Story

Love the way the Slut got her just Deserts and Brent is Now Possibly taking care of his ex-friends kid. as his friend gets the better woman and a Better Life.

Nice ending

We kind of knew where this was heading but it was still a nice read. I have mixed feelings about him banging his ex. It confirms she's still a slut but it brought him down to her level. I think Beth was pretty stupid in playing the woman's game of trying to make him jealous by going on a date with someone else. Yeah, they didn't have a commitment officially but they did emotionally. Expecting him to step in and break it up was just dumb. She drove him away. Trying to use jealousy to build a relationship is a very foolish game. But she realized her mistake and her own responsibility for what happened. And things worked out.

Great writing, but not sure about story

John should have taken the panties and thrown them in the proud groom/rapist's face. Let him wonder what actually happened. And why did she marry him, unless she is a slut and lied about how it happened. I would not talk to my mother if she baby sat for my ex like that either.

Well Written and Interesting

Your Characters are human and make mistakes. In many cases, they do
get very upset at other people's mistakes. The way things went I would not have been surprised if he had been so angry with Amy for proving that she was an untrustworthy slut, that Beth would have been told in no uncertain terms to leave and that I did not want to see her face again, because she broke my heart by seeking another guy.....

One of Your Best

Great ending, and I LOVE A Happy Ending!

This makes Jersey Shores seem as Classic as Tess d'Urbervilles

r-e-s-p-e-c-t. (for beth) Yeah, that more than makes up for John's sociopathic activities. Then he tries to have it both ways. They become friends with benefits. John has balled 'sluts' that he has no respect for and then can't handle it when Beth goes on a date. He can't stand the idea of a strong woman (as his mother apparently was in relation to his father). Fantasizes himself (He-man) calling the shots as to who does who. (Caligula?) Then Beth shows up after he has showered the (alcohol-induced, sound familiar?) grudge-fuck from Amy off his manhood. And Beth pleads, "Take me, I'm yours--exclusively. There is not enough cyberspace in universe to scratch the surface of how sick and tortured this drivel is.

Nice

A nice story. You're one of the best.

Wierd

We had two couples that actually did this, they were friends for years than switched partners after getting divorced. One couple made it, one didn't, great story, like you said, life goes on, thanks.

From DG Hear

Hope you enjoyed the ride. Whole story posted in three days as promissed (thanks to Lit). I know every story isn't for everyone. I'm not always sure how a story is going to turn out. It all depends what comes out of my crazy mind. I do try to write with emotion and believeable characters.

Not every story can end the way you want it to. I just hope that it was an enjoyale read for you. Thanks you to all that stayed tuned and took the time to comment. It really is much appreciated. Oh, congrats to those who figured out Brent was the baby's dad.
With respect
DG Hear

Two wrongs do not make it right!

The main character of your story 'John' doesn't have any respect for woman. Agreed that he was cheated upon by his own wife, he had no right to willingly and deliberately take another man's wife (even if she was his ex-wife). And the two cheaters, as you call them indeed married each other sooner than the "love birds" you talked about in your story. Fathers and sons don't happen in this world because there is sperm commenction between them, but because there is love between them. If I had a pet (Who could not be born through my sperm), I would have fought to have custody of it. But John so comfortably forgot Amy's son. I think these things speak a lot of your characters. I love your stories, but this one was pure bull shit!

Almost There

Just a couple of suggestions to your good series: show Amy had had at least one other slutty time after getting drunk, but did NOT get PG, and have John just get her hot and bothered and then call her a slut and walk away with her naked in the men's room. Then he would stay consistent.

Nice Story

Well written in the DG style but you make it hard to like your main character. He's kind of a hypocrite screwing a married woman and most likely impregnating her. Of course, Brent and Amy are supposed to be the bad guys. Just a few inconsistencies. Brent rapes Amy when they are both drunk, impregnates her, so she marries him. That's what they call it now days when you screw a woman that's so drunk she doesn't know who she's with. It's probably the most novel courting ritual I've ever heard. Let's see, John gets so plastered (just like Brent) and angry he screws his ex wife for revenge on her weddinng night but a couple hours later when Beth wakes him up from a drunken stuper he seems to have all his faculties and actually carries on a pretty intelligent conversation. Usually, after drinking that much, one is dead to the world once their head hits the pillow. If you can coxes speech from a drunken sleeping person it's usually just to tell someone to leave them alone. Then there is Beth. She agrees to a date with Ron just to make John jealous. I thought they were being completely honest with each other. Poor Ron, he's the only one in this story with any real integrity and John's Father even though he is a hen pecked milk toast. His mother? I couldn't even begin to tell you about her issues. However, it does explain John's behavior. Acorn from the tree and all that. Here's a recap, John and Beth are raising Brent's two daughters and one child of their own. Brent and Amy are raising one child of Brent's and one child of John's, so far. When this chick gets drunk there's a good chance Bill Clinton could be the next father. John's mother is refusing to acknowledge Amy as her EX daughter-in-law and laying claim to all of the kids as her grand children. These two families are so intertwined that they will be in close contact for quite a while. Are you sure you are done DG? You have a pretty good soap opera going here. You never say where this takes place but only in America can you have family values like this. Let's put the fun back in DysFUNctional. I have to admit if these characters were consistent and had any integrity it would be a pretty boring story and with your writing style it's actually a very entertaining story. Clinically speaking, it makes me want to cry knowing that it is actually closer to reality than fiction. Oh Well, job security. Thank you for a well written story. As always, a pleasure to read.

This story is among the best by DG Hear

The story is in the basic tradition of D.G. Hear. There's no lack of surprises. The situation looks bad for John until he and Beth decide to be exclusive. I hope this author again becomes more active in posting his very original, nearly always interesting stories. RAG

hmmm

i would say this was a good story but even though i kinda though john would leave amy, you didnt really explain amy or why she fucked up, especially with remarrying so soon after getting dirvorced. unusually you're better at that but i guess it was just an off day for you. also, you never explained if brent fucked amy more than once and kinda gave the impression she didnt because she acted to guilty/sick when she realized what she did at the reunion. to be honest, i was kinda disappointed in this story

OK

Nice DG story. As we all ewpect!

I liked this story

Unlike previous posts I think it is appropriate that John should fuck and impregnate the slut Amy. Brent did it to him, turnabouts fair play right? How great can it be that John no longer has to pay alimony to Amy but that Brent not only has to pay support to Beth but also has to raise John's child? John should not feel guilty for leaving Amy's bastard, he always had the feeling that it wasn't his and dna proved it. He wasn't around the bastard long enough to bond with it. John may have a bad temper, but by and large he's a good guy and Beth never did anything wrong throughout the story. I think its great that they get togather while the 2 cheaters got togather and that Amy's already cheating on Brent. John's mother is a real piece of work though, I would feel no loyalty to her. Her being upset because John's not keeping her appraised of every detail in his life is funny, especially as she's holding Amy's bastard while bitching at him.

A Lack of Judgement

John never showed that he felt he had anything to help Amy cheat. When he showed up at the reunion knowing that when Amy got drunk she would get horny, he should have made her aware of his being there. To never admit his part in the situation showed just how thick headed he was.
Not to accept Amy's baby was almost unbelievable. I may have raised a child that I didn't father, but it made no difference to me. I raised her as her father and I continue to love here. I don't even want to know if she is or isn't mine.
John seems to have a hard time admitting his part and trying to work things out with Amy. I would say that Amy has been hurt and confused since the reunion, which is one reason for marrying so soon after the divorce.
Still, a good story, Sir. I just don't like the John acted.

Not Good!!!!!

Who wrote this a 5th grader. This was awful everyone in the story sucked even the grandmother. What a waste of time reading this.

The ending -- OK, the journey -- not so much.

DG Hear stated "Not every story can end the way you want it to." I don't really have too much trouble where it ends, especially him winding up with Beth, but the path to that ending is another thing. It came off like a soap opera, and (even by those standards) a bad one, one more bordering on farce. Beth is about the only quasi-sympathetic character, and the rest are characterizations.

Well done and a very good story

The author kind of gave away that he wasn't the father of Amy's baby in chapter 2, but all in all the story is very entertaining and a good read. Very real and believeable characters and situations makes the story easy to read. I think the story shows that there was a lot of thought put into the authors work and I just have to say Thanks for the good story.

i'm glad

i'm glad i don't think like you, thank god i don't.

Well

It was a good story--ONE VERY BAD THING--WHY, do these four ass holes need so many children--IS IS IT IT a need to breed--I am glad they are paying for the children--wake up DG--smell the roses not baby shit.

Interesting

This is a different type of writing but is great.Thank you for writing it.

A Single Mistake is Apparently One Too Many

Good writing as usual but John ain't my hero. So Amy makes a semi-conscious mistake while she is blind drunk and essentially raped by Mark. And next she makes the unforgivable error of being unconscious while being raped by Brent. And instantly she becomes slut of the century with no possibility of redemption. Wish I was as perfect as John so I could feel justified in demanding that the woman that I love more than life itself cannot ever make a single mistake. Sometimes love means letting someone else say she/he is sorry. All that being said, Ialways look forward to the next DG Hear story.

One of the most stupid stories/heroes I've ever read

truly a walking imbecile, this "John" character here.

Life goes on....

It is sad to think that John feels he cannot do any wrong. He needs to become a man and stand up to the plate. I am referring to the Class Reunion were he saw his wife talking and drinking with Mark, why didn't he do something there instead of running to his room. He left early leaving his wedding band, how childish. People make mistakes, but a lot of people work their mistakes out. He could have at least tried. I feel Beth will be faithful to John, but will John stray if he does not get his way? I think he will not stray, buy instead he will pout get drunk. My, juch a manly thing to do.

Interesting read. Beth is the only one with a semblance of integrity. John has become tainted, Amy really is an irresponsible slut, and Brent? Well, as they say, with friends like these, who needs enemies? I keep seeing comments indicating that many of the readers think John should forgive Amy's transgressions, that she's not really a slut and she just made a couple of mistakes because she was drunk. I don't buy that argument. Consider that each time, she made the conscious decision to get drunk knowing full well how her behavior is affected by alcohol. She cuckolded her husband John (give me a break, she woke up with a bunch of semen running out of her pussy and she thought it was a dream about Brent?), she went to the reunion without John and made a decision to drink and then to go to Mark's room, someone about whom she lied when she discussed her former boyfriend with her husband, and of course, she bent over without hesitation on her wedding night for John, even though she had just married Brent! I'll grant that alcohol does lower inhibitions, but it does not cause a person to do something they really don't want to do. I believe that each time, Amy was full unto the moment -- she really wanted the hot, forbidden sex -- what she did not like was the consequence of each transgression. Should we forgive the very drunk driver who kills another because he/she made the conscious decision to drink, then made another (bad) decision to drive while drunk? Well maybe some readers forgive this but society sure doesn't. If Amy knew there had been problems with her drinking over the years, and she chose to do it again in a social situation, then it's like any other risk-taking behavior, and it's not surprising that the person playing with fire gets burned from time to time. One other little plot hole . . . if John is driving a tow motor, working lots of extra shifts and tired all of the time, then how does he have so much time to watch Amy all day long at her job in the lingerie store in the shopping mall? The ending is happy but John better watch behind his back whenever Beth has a frying pan nearby . . .

First, let me just say that I really enjoyed this series. You're a good writer, and it was an interesting story. I, personally, prefer stories where the couple get back together at the end but this was interesting none the less. That said, I thought that this story went a bit "out there" in this third installment. I kind of guessed that you were sitting something up with Beth, but I wasn't sure how you were going to pull it off, and the whole rape thing...

Honestly, though, the thing I found most disappointing was the lack of Amy's perspective after we left the First Chapter. We got a hint of what was going on in her mind in that first chapter, but afterward, we don't hear from her anymore. I can't help but feel that really hurts the story, in some fashion. It certainly makes it hard for us to understand what's going on there. The whole "Amy marrying Brent" thing is very hard to understand without showing her perspective on things.

Still, minor quibbles aside, thanks for the great story.

Into a corner.

Sometimes an idea can start and end up with nowhere to go. This one is like that, it reads like the author was running out of an idea for a conclusion.
It certainly lacks in being erotic, then it lacks in being believable.

Great story

I would have done what John did and since his mother kept the kids I would have managed to get a DNA test done and would have framed it so I could look at it and know I stuck it up to him, my parents I wouldn't talk to them thanks their attitude.
The writer left many hints, like chapter two, we could see the kid was not going to be his, then the cooling of the friendship between Brent and John, it showed that Brent knew that he was gonna get caught with the DNA test, both he and Amy knew it and there is the implication they done it before, Amy could tell Beth about having had Mark before the marriage but could not tell having had Brent as well could she.
As for violence I don't condone it but I accept it and understand it as I also would have done the same and the only reason I didn't beat my wife's lover is that he gave me the opportunity to leave my marriage with my head straight.

Nice effort

I suspected at least part of this might happen. Somehow you were able to make the swapping of wives work out even though on the surface it seems just too cliche'.

Another Great one!

You have done it again,DGH. I have so enjoyed these four and their relationship. A fine ending also. Your stories are certainly among the best on this site.

This was just an awfully good story, DG.

In fact, I think it just might be your best yet. Thanks for another fine story.

I've read better

DG: Your competence in putting pen to paper is reaffirmed with this story. However, I didn't find it's all that compelling. Your characters, for the most part (perhaps Beth being the exception), were all pretty much flawed and not all that likable. John's revenge fuck with Amy at story's end was fairly indicative of just how much messed up these two were. For me it certainly made shallow John's subsequent pledge of commitment to Beth.

Writing: A; Story: C

Thanks for efforts.

Very well done

I thought the story showed realistic emotions in a very difficult circumstance.

GREAT!

Thanks for a great story excellantly written

I have to say;

YOU WRITE great story DG, I hope to read more of the same. R.T.

Hooray for happy endings!!!

I liked how this story turned out with losses and wins.

Wow, you don't seem to be able to ever

write about someone with morals, ethics, or standards. Is it because you're too lazy to review your own stories after your first draft to catch unrealistic behavior? or is it because you have no morals, ethics or standards. I'm thinking the later... I can't remember ever thinking any of the people in your postings are anyone I'd want to touch with a 10' pole.

The following comment is wrong

You do indeed write about people with morals. Sometimes it is even both husband and wife ... LOL

However, I do have to agree that Beth was the ONLY character in this story with a decent moral standard.

What a convoluted story.

More like a soap opera except it is not sexy.

John is a violent evil person. John is impulsive and unable to control his emotions and is totally incapable of guilt, remorse or empathy. Of all the characters, John is the worse since he thinks it is okay for him to fuck the wives of other men but almost kills other men if they fuck his wife.

DWornock, how is John the bad guy

just because his wife is a slut, who did he fuck? Unless your reading a different story. It was Brent who fucked Amy. She was the slut and name one man besides you that would want to kick the guys ass for fucking his wife.

another very well written and interesting story by DGH

The story is complex in terms of relationships and understanding about how the husbands, wives and best friend interact with each other. Amy stands out as a special case as she lost voluntary control of her actions when she drank to much - which was usual the case when she'd been out on the town.

Additionally, DGH was capable of written a story with direction, yet one that provides for people interacting in a meaningful ways.

The story was also adds a mystery as regards who is the biological father of Matthew. The ending of the story is a happy one, which is more often than not the case in DGH's Loving Wives Tales.

RE UNIONS ARE LIKE OLD TIRES

they served their purpose and now just wait for new ones to blow out. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is the Right Ending

Although this chapter also lacked the emotion of chapter #1, this was clearly the correct way to finish. There was so little motivation for her to cheat in the first place, he could never be truly certain that her impregnation had been an "accident".

His mother is an idiot

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Overall, I enjoyed the series but

It was almost as if Amy underwent a character change - and one that i found I simply couldn't believe in. Her motives for what happened were a definite weak spot in the story.

moms today no honor

well written nice flow, but the ex-wife and mom are 78% of all women,No Honor, no loyalty, Ive heard stories like this and a lot worse about wives and moms in today's world so i find the story realtic.Never marry Never commit never give an inch, a karmic rule Evil people Marry good people, evil never marries evil, and good doesn't marry good(much), and if family dont back you(watching a cheating whores kid)-Fuck em up anyway you can.

trucks

DGH
Should you write again about truckers, please refer to a truck "depot" as a terminal, or as we say in the trade, The junk yard. 3,000,000 miles and 34 years a Teamster. Cheers!

Yeah

Great story. Well written. Trouble is that it's too true to life. Today women lack honor, loyalty, integrity; it too bad but it's too true. Women's liberty turned out to mean something degrading rather than something honest!