All Comments on 'The Long Road to Ruin Ch. 44'

by Lady_Blackhawk

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Big Lie

Where are the "Illustrations" ????????????????

IMcRoutIMcRoutabout 14 years ago
No illustrations

i can't see any illustrations either!!!

Lady_BlackhawkLady_Blackhawkabout 14 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

I'm not sure why the illustrations are not showing up. I put the chapter into the submission queue 3 weeks ago and waited and waited and waited for it to be published. I apologize for anything that went wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
No Images at all!

It is very bad when a story that claims to be illustrated has empty blocks with the word "Image" only. I was very tuned off by the lack of images, which was why I choose to read this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I see them.

well, I can see the pictures.

Good job. :)

jonnar01jonnar01about 14 years ago
Another strong chapter in a great epic

More enjoyable work; LBH- I really enjoy the subtle character changes Shiloh continues to demonstrate, and it makes reading more provocative and engaging. She certainly seems less 'self destructive' (if that's the proper observation) and more confident and more mature and self confident as each chapter develops; I thought her relationship with the Bard Pia was the most balanced - and as always very erotic and original.

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
The illustrations...

...came up for me with "no" problem

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another scintillating chapter.

i don't know how many times i got aroused just by reading reading this chapter. reading from the first chapter till now has been worth my time. hope the author releases a book =) i would buy it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

She annoys me with her slutty self indolence and selfishness. I actually loved the story until chapter 20 when Vico broke up with her. It's all downhill from there. She has sex with so many people that the steamy scenes gets so boring and overrated. Sorry. Hopefully Vico appears soon, or else I'm quitting :(

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