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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/31/10

Needs more than just dialogue

Would be really good to not just have dialogue, but also descriptions, what they're thinking etc.

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by WithMyHands02/01/10

Well I really Liked it.

I thought this was very good. It made me hot and in the end it made me chuckle. I don't know if that was the plan or not, but it did. A little more description might be nice, but there again, it was consistent the whole way through, and the tone was good enough to carry the story. Good job!

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by Anonymous07/03/10

hehe

Do I detect a fetish?

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by Pepperpuppy08/11/10

Wwoooooooo!

That story really does deserve the 3 fingers award. WELL DONE.

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