Really interesting story. Hot sex with a lot of other things going on in the life of the main character makes it fun to read. Thanks for the good chapter
The rest was a mechanical stroke operation that does not seem to advance the storyline. Since there was little tension it lost value for me. What happened to the trolls? Has a new filter been put in place, or are they too lazy to read so many words?
Tha first chapter wa good to. I still wonder what is going to be in play wth his ex's lawyer? So I assume at least 1 or more chapters are coming?
Good! now I have a vested interest in this story!
Thanks for writing!
to see how things work out with the Attorney giving himself away.
He could be Losing his License and going to Jail. which would be a shame and be Sued by Hubby for Alienation of Affection. and Fraud.
I THINK U WATCH 2 MUCH PORN IE THE WOMEN WOULD TEAR EACH OTHERS EYES OUT IN REAL LIFE AND THE MEN WOULD END UP IN JAIL M4 ATTEMPTED MURDER. GOOD FANT6ACY THOUGH NEVER HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE
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Damn good chapter
Really interesting story. Hot sex with a lot of other things going on in the life of the main character makes it fun to read. Thanks for the good chapter
Nice Courtroom Scene
The rest was a mechanical stroke operation that does not seem to advance the storyline. Since there was little tension it lost value for me. What happened to the trolls? Has a new filter been put in place, or are they too lazy to read so many words?
I liked this Chapter the best so far!
Tha first chapter wa good to. I still wonder what is going to be in play wth his ex's lawyer? So I assume at least 1 or more chapters are coming?
Good! now I have a vested interest in this story!
Thanks for writing!
Can't Wait
to see how things work out with the Attorney giving himself away.
He could be Losing his License and going to Jail. which would be a shame and be Sued by Hubby for Alienation of Affection. and Fraud.
UTTER SHIT
I THINK U WATCH 2 MUCH PORN IE THE WOMEN WOULD TEAR EACH OTHERS EYES OUT IN REAL LIFE AND THE MEN WOULD END UP IN JAIL M4 ATTEMPTED MURDER. GOOD FANT6ACY THOUGH NEVER HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE
Another 1*
Because it is mostly more boring bar relationships that add nothing to the story and because of the perverted anal garbage.
Boring
Just boring sex. Where's the story?
My least favorite chapter
I wasn't expecting the kinky shit. Not what I normally read but I'll continue...
Meh
Thanks for the effort.
That was just suck and fuck
Let's get back to the meaty parts of the story. Let's go find Elaine and screw her!
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