From Now On

Harsh but effective

At least he can still enjoy Joe's friendship.

Nice little flash story

On a much repeated theme. If the latest Google info is not wrong there is about a 20% chance of catching HIV on the first intercourse. If she immediately washed herself out the probability would go down. Of course if they did anal then the chance is more like 50%. We all have the right to our fantasies, though.

Good Job

Liked you story, quick and entertaining. It should please all the "torch the bitch" crowd as this could be the ultimate revenge. It's just a story folks so cut the author a little slack. Nicely down, shows a lot of thought and a good imagination. Keep up the good work.

Neat little flash story

Didn't quite get the very last couple of lines thought. They don't really make sense to me. Perhaps the author could have kept going for a couple more sentences to make his meaning clear.

Overall I like it though, keep up the good work!

Tyr

Very effective

The transgressor punishes herself. Very neat. A death sentence seems a little harsh but that's what is at risk these days. She's not only a whore, she is stupid.

DD, this was good.

You have a wonderful, if somewhat sick mnd!

Hello DangerouslyDead

I have followed your stories on SOL and I am glad you now write on LIT. This story was short and to the point. Very well done. Should we feel sorry for the wife or soon to be ex-wife? I don't think so. Anyway keep the stories coming.

Crap

Pure garbage. I hope YOU get aids.

Cheaters beware

Very nice twist my friend. Look forward to more of your tales. Soon I hope.

Great, great, great

Well done!!!

Short and concise: very good job!

I really appreciate this story... Please write more in this manner!

Too Short

Incomplete, lacked depth and detail of characters. Give up "Flash" stories they are only good for synopses, not for lazy authors attempting to pass them off as a real story. You seem to have a good imagination, use it!

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Don't know where Bruce22 got his numbers...

...but the probability of male to female transmission
of HIV from one instance of vaginal intercourse given
she's otherwise healthy, no open sores etc. from
another STD for example, is more on the order of
1 in 1000.

Librarian Jim is correct

for USA suburban community where I believe the story took place, though it is interesting to note that 1 in 100 is more likely in African countries. I was lazy, and remembered that the probability of transmission was low! The story seemed based a 100% transmission rate, an idea which I wished to disabuse. But I admited to the fantasy aspect of the story and I admit that I invented my first comment.... But now I have looked at various CDC reports and seen that the probability of punishment is much lower than I imagined...
Sorry!

Short but good

I enjoyed the storyline and found it to be very just. Thanks for the quick little read.

Sometimes it's just what the reader needs

Now that is a real good slap in the face.

Reality is such a mean bitch.

At Least

He can move on, she will not know for a year or two if she has A.I.D.s but the thought will be with her and sex will be the last thing on her mind for a while while he gets a divorce and finds someone else, thanks.

good flash...

...story..OOOPs!!

Nice!

A bit short, but the ending was nice, funny, and justified.

oops

Talk about something one regrets.

Cheating bitch got what she richly deserved!

Albeit, a bit drastic, that is exactly what a woman who would cheat on her husband with his best friend, in his own house, richly deserves.

Short but sweet! She truly got her just reward.

Outstanding!

I love a happy ending.

Nice nice nice

Very nice.

Brilliant

Karma to the enth degree

similiar but still good

2 different writers and the faithless woman that killed herself.

all sluts deserve it

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

That was fucking great......it was the funniest story ever........lol

Probably she wouldn't be HIV infected.

However, the risk is much greated from a man to a woman than from a woman to a man.

Regardless, she is certainly very afraid and it will be months, perhaps a year before she knows for certain that than she didn't get HIV infected. Just the fear is a horrible punishment.

The story is far too short for 5***** so I have to deduct 1 or 2 stars.

reguardless of the last comment from jack-asses are us

this was a quick witted tale of a cheating soon to be dead slut. nice tale

another

unfinished story, geeeeeez1cce

I bumped your score up

because DWeeb DWornock thinks size matters in these matters.

heh heh heh

flash forward, whore dies, man remarries, lives happily ever after. Heh heh heh!

Humorous and insightful comment by the anon below.

I wish you would have put your name to your comment, I would thank you personally.

Story itself is below par for 2*.

GOT YA

no, you got yar-self. TK U MLJ LV NV

A WHO GOT WHO

and the winner is ???????? TK U MLJ LV NV

Payback

can be your own doing.

Outstanding

Outstanding. What an end. 5 stars.

Short and Sweet !

Nice story; and again Tazz317 proves he or she is a shit head. Can you even read?

this is why i love this author.

That was....

Fitting.

Sooooo

What is wrong with Tazz????

O, I know, although with all the abrevs he uses he is the only one who knows what they mean so we can pretent if he is nuts or not???

bill

Now that is justice

Incarnate justice - harsh and fitting - wow - it is actually not too likely she would get infected that quickly - but you never know and fear is a killer - if she did there is plenty of hope nowadays with retro-viral treatment and such but it is harsh and scary and expensive - and she deserves what happens next.

To share his HIV status for no particular reason should not have been necessary - of course - gratx bitch. LOL Karma just ain't that linear though.

Thanks***

For the read.

Very Short Vicious and Tasteful

Very good

Enjoyed it

A fun flash story.

OH YEAH

Ha ha ha ha. Fucking cunt. Whore got what she deserved.

Ouch!

Hoisted with her own petard!

5 STARS!!!!

This is just too funny!!! The sad thing is that this has probably happened to someone at some point. Truth is stranger then fiction, hahaha. Please don't stop!!!!