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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Keep writing!

You stories are so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Best I've read.

This story was amazing. This is the exact fantasy I want to roleplay with my girlfriend. Hopefully I'm brave enough to get her to read this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please

Love this!! I need more!

sissy_felicitysissy_felicityalmost 7 years ago
Nice start

Oh this could go so many ways. Next installment 😉

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

Begins well. But descriptions of sexual activity are really lacking. Basically all thats said is that the activities happened. Details. Details. Details. Missing.

She opened his pants and would periodically keep him hard with her hand and/or mouth. Is that an erotic description? Hardly.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good story's but one thing i do notice out of this whole series is the lack of consistency in what is going on, one min he has a gag on, next min he doesn't, but then now he's having it taken off, or in ch. 03 for example, he gets a blindfold on, next thing you know, he's now having a pillow case being taken off, really great stuff but should proof read after before publishing!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Ok start. I hoped for a slightly more aggressive female and a guy who wanted to be her bottom while she rode him. She had just come from a shower so she was clean enough for him.

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