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Coffinworm
The description doesn't really fit the contents. Maybe, "monstrous rape scene"? If the intent of this story was to describe a horrifying sexual experience in detail , then bravo. I'm sure there are readers who are turned on by rape, murder , sexual assault and borderline bestiality ( I don't count myself amongst them today), but for everyone else maybe give a more accurate description of what's in store. With that said, I don't think it was badly written and I like the imagination and imagery . I just would have preferred that creativity be put towards something that was stimulating instead of terrifying .
-J
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