Nice start! The promise of, at least, a sequel, really gets the juices flowing! Will it be a three-way, or, just, giving the daughter a show?! We're waiting, even now, with anticipation!
I noticed its been a while since you posted anything, I do hope you write some more soon :)
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Anonymous09/11/15
Please draw the story out more next time.
I enjoyed your story very much. The only change which would have allowed me to enjoy it more would be for it to have been longer and more drawn out. That builds tension and is a good thing.
English
Short and Sweet!
Thanks for writing!
HOT!!
Deserves a chapter 2
Definitely
Deserves at least a second chapter
Hurry! Write the sequel!!!
just perfect
Wow...just love your stories....more...more...more please
i love love ur stories.
please tell me their is a part 2
very nice
would like to read what happens with Daria, Mara, and Mara's dad.
please!
Oh god more more more more!
The Promise Of More To Come!
Nice start! The promise of, at least, a sequel, really gets the juices flowing! Will it be a three-way, or, just, giving the daughter a show?! We're waiting, even now, with anticipation!
So long
I noticed its been a while since you posted anything, I do hope you write some more soon :)
Please draw the story out more next time.
I enjoyed your story very much. The only change which would have allowed me to enjoy it more would be for it to have been longer and more drawn out. That builds tension and is a good thing.
WORDS
but no story
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