Thanks for writing!
Deserves a chapter 2
Deserves at least a second chapter
Hurry! Write the sequel!!!
Wow...just love your stories....more...more...more please
i love love ur stories.
please tell me their is a part 2
would like to read what happens with Daria, Mara, and Mara's dad.
Oh god more more more more!
Nice start! The promise of, at least, a sequel, really gets the juices flowing! Will it be a three-way, or, just, giving the daughter a show?! We're waiting, even now, with anticipation!
I noticed its been a while since you posted anything, I do hope you write some more soon :)
I enjoyed your story very much. The only change which would have allowed me to enjoy it more would be for it to have been longer and more drawn out. That builds tension and is a good thing.
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