All Comments on 'Lupine Mountain Ch. 04'

dammit i hate this cliffhanger...plz u need to update this is madness

Now thats the way to keep we readers on the edge of our seats!!!!

My only criticism is that the chapter was way too short. I know that you have your reasons for the length of each submission, but it would be so well received to read on into a second or maybe third page???

Keep up the great work.

at first i couldnt believe it when i saw ch 3 posted yesterday and now you leave us with this cliffhanger!!

brilliant, please dont keep us waiting

More chapters please!

great cliffhanger, please write more

You stopped. Please continue.

please continue writing i need to know what happens its just to good

chapters

This story is freakin great!!! I hope you add more chapters soon.

amazing.. i hope you continue writing this story soon:)

Love the story..but need more. Hope to see a new chapter soon. Totally Addicted!

this is a great story but I want more please I am enjoying it very much thank you for such a great story

When are you going to continue this story it has been a while since you posted the last chapter. Continue this story soon please!

oo oo hurry I gotta know! lol