What a nice little story
Very well thought out...nothing crude....leaving nothing to the imagination, yet everything as well. It didn't devolve into a sex-fest (that gets SO boring after a while in so many stories), and Joan's invitation leaves it up to OUR imagination as to the events yet to take place!
Thanks for taking the time and making the effort to contribute to Literotica...really enjoyed it!
Very well done story. The start was great with no time lost getting into the good part.
I found this to be a very erotic story... absolutely no sex, but lots of atmosphere... very very fun to read.
I registered specifically to comment on this story..it was very arousing and sensual..brilliantly written..i hope you write more stories similar to this one..great job !
About the only way this could have been more fun would have been if Joan had also been naked when she walked in (having stripped off in the hallway).
There is no way I would ever be more interested in a game than a woman naked or otherwise.
...and you definitely need to write Joan's chapter next.
great story way to go girl hope there is a part two when all the guys go over to Gary,s and Joan,s house
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