But the writing is pathetic. Your thoughts are so random that it is hard to understand anything in this chapter. Yes I got that Peter fucked the wife on the dancefloor, I get that the pathetic husband got turned on by knowing this. And yes I get that he is someone who has no pride or ego. He is a 'man' no longer. The wife wears the trousers and he will wear the skirt. The wife will also be fucking anyone and everyone she can. But it's your nightmare that you are writing I am just glad I have my pride and balls. you don't seem to.
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Anonymous02/03/10
How is this even a marriage???
Honestly, she shows him nothing but contempt, she controls the finances, demeans him, cheats on him and relegates him to a "prison cell" (your words not ours) and has him doing a maids work and you're trying to tell us that she loves him and respects him and he adores her? Why? what does she do for him that a fuck story in Lit can't? Oh right, she beats his ass black and blue and leaves him tied up for an entire night...not because he likes it but because she likes it. If the roles were reversed, the courts would say that he was an abuser. Go fuck yourself, asswipe.
English
sick
makes me sick.
Colin
Your so fucking gay.
Not only is the subject total nonsense.
But the writing is pathetic. Your thoughts are so random that it is hard to understand anything in this chapter. Yes I got that Peter fucked the wife on the dancefloor, I get that the pathetic husband got turned on by knowing this. And yes I get that he is someone who has no pride or ego. He is a 'man' no longer. The wife wears the trousers and he will wear the skirt. The wife will also be fucking anyone and everyone she can. But it's your nightmare that you are writing I am just glad I have my pride and balls. you don't seem to.
How is this even a marriage???
Honestly, she shows him nothing but contempt, she controls the finances, demeans him, cheats on him and relegates him to a "prison cell" (your words not ours) and has him doing a maids work and you're trying to tell us that she loves him and respects him and he adores her? Why? what does she do for him that a fuck story in Lit can't? Oh right, she beats his ass black and blue and leaves him tied up for an entire night...not because he likes it but because she likes it. If the roles were reversed, the courts would say that he was an abuser. Go fuck yourself, asswipe.
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