I realy like what you have done with this story but I htink that after all his wife and the lawyer did to him I would like to see them both pay for it. After the lawyer settles everything I would send out the packages to the church, his wife, the bar association, and her friends and family to show what kind of people they are. Or at the very least send the package to his wife and then file the alienation of affection suite even if it is only for $1 to have it on record. But I would at least ruin him career wise and her reputation wise. Great story.
You dish out an excellent meal.... I wonder if the revenge dish is worth
eating. There are so many other interesting possibilities out there so why waste time in revenge?
Like the way things are working out for Rob. cant wait to hear what Elaine wants from him. Maybe forgiveness or the Original offer of $600
sounds good compared to Nothing.
Yes it will be interesting to see what Elaine has to say.
And where will the relationship with Candy go?
Will Marge and Susan extract any revenge. Or worm their way back in?
Thanks for writing!
I'd like to hear more about Elaine & less about robs conquests.. I want rob to burn the bitch at the stakes but I'm only reading bits & peaces of her & more about his sexual escapades.. It's getting sort of boring
Best chapter yet. He finally gets his act together.
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Anonymous08/31/15
Why would he ever call Elaine?
And I'm glad he dumped Marge and Susan. That was a bad combination looking for someplace to wreck. Maybe he can move away, buy a house and find a good woman? We'll see.
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Revenge
I realy like what you have done with this story but I htink that after all his wife and the lawyer did to him I would like to see them both pay for it. After the lawyer settles everything I would send out the packages to the church, his wife, the bar association, and her friends and family to show what kind of people they are. Or at the very least send the package to his wife and then file the alienation of affection suite even if it is only for $1 to have it on record. But I would at least ruin him career wise and her reputation wise. Great story.
Enjoyable Story
You dish out an excellent meal.... I wonder if the revenge dish is worth
eating. There are so many other interesting possibilities out there so why waste time in revenge?
Very Good Story
Like the way things are working out for Rob. cant wait to hear what Elaine wants from him. Maybe forgiveness or the Original offer of $600
sounds good compared to Nothing.
Very interesting chapter.
Yes it will be interesting to see what Elaine has to say.
And where will the relationship with Candy go?
Will Marge and Susan extract any revenge. Or worm their way back in?
Thanks for writing!
What about Elaine
I'd like to hear more about Elaine & less about robs conquests.. I want rob to burn the bitch at the stakes but I'm only reading bits & peaces of her & more about his sexual escapades.. It's getting sort of boring
Alright
Now we have a good set up for the last chapter. Finally. Will Rob hook up with someone for keeps? Maybe Rob gets back with the ex? We'll see...
Best chapter yet. He finally gets his act together.
Why would he ever call Elaine?
And I'm glad he dumped Marge and Susan. That was a bad combination looking for someplace to wreck. Maybe he can move away, buy a house and find a good woman? We'll see.
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