Bittersweet

Indeed, very bittersweet. Enjoyed~

SHORT ONE

Yes a short one but it got me to tears. Thank you.

Not all good stories are long or happy.

It was a sad little tale and so well written.

wow

This was short but great. I cried a little bit but it was worth it

Editor?

You need someone to read your work before you publish it. This would have been better for it.
I liked the storyline, it was sweet and loving but also a little sad. I thought that the husband was very sweet though it seemed as though he had given up a little.

About this edition

This is a raw, unedited version. As an author, I often use Literotica as a vehicle for feedback on fledgling ideas. For the completed, fully edited work please visit:
http://www.amazon.com/Bittersweet-intimate-tale-l ove-ebook/dp/B0044R95HE/ref=ntt_at_ep_dpi_1