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Indeed, very bittersweet. Enjoyed~
SHORT ONE
Yes a short one but it got me to tears. Thank you.
Not all good stories are long or happy.
It was a sad little tale and so well written.
wow
This was short but great. I cried a little bit but it was worth it
Editor?
You need someone to read your work before you publish it. This would have been better for it.
I liked the storyline, it was sweet and loving but also a little sad. I thought that the husband was very sweet though it seemed as though he had given up a little.
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