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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/02/10

DAMn!

You had me going there. He was so much screwed out of his pension and a job!@!!!

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by Anonymous02/02/10

Load of Rubbish

The title says it all

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by Anonymous02/02/10

LMAO

Good one!

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by Anonymous02/02/10

sexy and well written

You know how to weave a good story!

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by Anonymous02/03/10

made me smile.

hehehhe

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by Anonymous03/08/10

very nice :)

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by Anonymous03/29/10

Tricked me too.

I was totally surprised by the ending. He's got very thoughtful buddies on the p. force.

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by teach196506/16/10

Had me going!

I was beginning to feel like the guy was in deep s*** until the surprise ending. Great story. I gave it a 5. Right back atcha from teach1965.

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by baronearth01/02/11

chop suey and panties!

hi
really enjoyed this sexy and mirth making - keep them coming

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by Anonymous08/14/14

Your Character Doesn't Need a Woman...

Because he is a Woman. Bitch, Moan, Whine! What a ponderous load of crap just trying to get through the first few paragraphs.

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