You succeeded in your mission, sir, and I understand more than most.
As a very old person, married a little longer than they before my wife died, truely could have been there. Very insightful, in the least, and a wonderful story well told. An excellent piece.
A beautiful story and maybe an answer to my fears.
My wife and I have been married 40 years and have known each other for 17 years before that. We often have the same thoughts at the same time and finish a sentence the other started. I don't remember what I had for supper yesterday (without having to take 15 minutes to think about), but I can still vividly remember the white ruffled blouse, gray pleated skirt and matching pink garter belt, panties and bra I took off of her the first time we made love together - 44 years ago! I am afraid of the future!!!!!! If she goes first - half of me will go, and I will be a lost soul - if I go first, the same will be true for her! I don't want her to have that pain but I am afraid of it for myself.
The story was wonderful yet, carried a nice and simple feeling in it. I really liked the way you told it. It was the most emotional story I have read till now.
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Definitely a different twist. Enjoyed and thanks so much for sharing.
You succeeded in your mission, sir, and I understand more than most.
As a very old person, married a little longer than they before my wife died, truely could have been there. Very insightful, in the least, and a wonderful story well told. An excellent piece.
Thank You !!!
A beautiful story and maybe an answer to my fears.
My wife and I have been married 40 years and have known each other for 17 years before that. We often have the same thoughts at the same time and finish a sentence the other started. I don't remember what I had for supper yesterday (without having to take 15 minutes to think about), but I can still vividly remember the white ruffled blouse, gray pleated skirt and matching pink garter belt, panties and bra I took off of her the first time we made love together - 44 years ago! I am afraid of the future!!!!!! If she goes first - half of me will go, and I will be a lost soul - if I go first, the same will be true for her! I don't want her to have that pain but I am afraid of it for myself.
I loved it! Made me cry. You are so talented.
The story was wonderful yet, carried a nice and simple feeling in it. I really liked the way you told it. It was the most emotional story I have read till now.
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