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Your I.Q. is about 75
Who told you to write, your mom? She was wrong, your a idiot.
Not Bad
Don't listen to the idiot anonymous who talks about IQ. Some people just don't like different stories. Oh and by the way anonymous , it is "you're" and not "your" in this case.
HA HA HA Ha Ha Ha haaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa HA HA Ha Haaaa
To the last commentor... it is not only the story that is idiotic, the writing is wooden... and a cut and paste job from his other empty stories.
To: after_e
Many people have tried to offer this guy advice on how to write. He ignores everyone and continues to construct cut and paste submissions written in a narrative format with no dialogue, no real feeling and depth of character. He writes to blow up his ego so he can pretend to be an author by the number of words he writes. His writing is tasteless, baseless, and empty of any original thought. His submissions are Literotica spam.
sam sucks
sam sucks and likes to jerk off to all the comments...also to people who like this ass wipe...screw you!
So I was mistaken
Turns out I had never run into his submissions before since it was one of the few ones in this category, and naively assumed he was just a new writer who could use some improvement. After seeing his submissions however, I have to take that back and agree with most of the other comments here.
BUT, anonymous coward is so full of hate. I got a few insults in my inbox too. overboard much?
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