All Comments on 'Summer's Surrender Ch. 03'

alpha males are so damn sexy, especially when the female is battling hard not to give in.

Your back I do love this story keep it up

Please don't keep us waiting too long for an update. I'm really intrigued to see how their relationship will develop. Nice new idea...I likey!!!

Ah, I see.

I love the story. I hope Matt gets what he wants without hurting Summer.

I love the way that you started hot and then explained later, and love the chemistry between the two.Always watch out for the ones you don't like!

Great to have no distracting editing errors either.Cheers

i didnt like him at all in the first two chapters but i love him now. cant wait for more.

It would be hard not to hate yourself in this situation. Doesn't Matt realize he's making her feel cheap? He should at least attempt to show some affection towards her. She's a person not a victory prize. Hope he realizes this before he breaks her. Keep the chapters coming.

The sex is just too hot for words. I love how their personalities clash as well. Can't wait for more.

I love how Matt will go to any lengths to get his woman and the fact that she is still mentally strong after being manipulated into marrying him is awesome! I am confident that she will hold her own against her bully of a sexy husband. The chemistry between them is undoubtable and I can't wait to see how their relationship develops. I also cannot wait for their parents reactions, I'm sure, whether they're happy or angry, I'll be thoroughly entertained. Also, Jones is a major stick wad:) Can't wait for the next chapter. Your work is awesome!

Mm mm mm mm mmmmm!

I looooove Matt, and I can't wait for 'later'

Fair enough to some of the other comments, but Summer's a bit of a stiffie, and he's just helping her to realise who she truly is/ should be!

Can't wait for the next installment :d

I just discovered the series and read Ch1-3 in one sitting. The bleeping sex scenes are sooooooo H.O.T! And I agree that Matt may be pushing Summer too far a bit. But I also agree that Matt is super sexy lol. Update soon please!

I just wanted to put in my bid for the next chapter. I've re-read chapters 1-3 about five times. I need more. Please!!!

I've re-read this story a couple of times and I'm waiting with bated breath for the new installments!!! Hurry, please hurry!!!

so much for a strong women, can be controlled easily by a dick, so sad. reminds me of a trained dog that matt can just fuck at whim.

Okay, this fucked dog comment is bull. She wants it.

Heck I'd want it, and I don't even know what it feels like; he's a fictional character!

BS. Anywho, please update soon! :D

there times when a woman carries the weight of the world on her shoulder and she is always the problem solver. It is great when a woman finds a man that is stronger than she is and willing to help her solve the problems.

I a enjoying your story, keep up the good work and I a looking forward to the next chapter.

For the next chapters! This story is going great so far...

Ok so I read this story about 2 months ago and was so drawn in and excited that since i've re read the 3 chapters twice. Please give us chapter 4 soon my mouth is just salivating thinking of how good it's gonna be lol

I've read this story so many times! These two are so hot, especially Matt! Yeew, what I would do with a man like that! I really hope you'll finish this story! It's too good to stop now!

We need more on them=NOW!!! Thank you for the beginning chapters...

Don't know if you are still writing since your last update was more than a year ago. You are truly an amazing writer and I do hope that you will give this story a few more chapters as readers like us want to get to know more about Matt and Summer. Hope you will dissappoint us.

A POWERFUL start to a Great story! 5 stars so far! Please give us, who are waiting for you to continue, a full story. I can see about 7 more chapters of Matt and Summer! Please, Please, Please don't leave us hanging!

When are u going to update this story. Don't leave us hanging. Finish It

of the day that there well be another chapter posted. I love this story.

please update soon. I'm soooooooo missing this story.

Just wanted to say LOVING THIS STORY, hopefully we'll have MORE chapters??? LOL, LOL

I am glad that I hound this story. It's great and I'd love to read more

I need to know what happens! Pls update ASAP!

ready for more!!

Where are you??

I love this story want to know if summer cant just give in to the feelings for matt. and matt needs to tell her that he loves and isnt just using her for sex

Youve got to finish this!

I am so glad that I came upon this story please update soon I can't wait to read what happens next...please update soon!

Loving this!!!!!

Really good story. I hope you come back soon and finish. -DC

Adding in my portion of begging to come back and finish this marvellous story! Pretty pleeeeeeeeease! Thanks!

This is an amazing plot don't let it die. UPDATE SOON.....please :)

This is so good

I do not care if it has been 2 years, just finish.

I keep checking in on this story regulary hoping to see another chapter added.

Literotica should have a rule that the story is intact before it can be submitted.

Finish this great story!

please finish.

This is too hot. Please complete!

You know why I love this story so much besides the very, very hot sex? It's because the sex actually occurs in marriage first, as really should be the case for all of us!! I love the fact that Matt has longed for Summer all of this time and that he gets the girl of his dreams; and the fact that she is reluctant but easily submits to him only adds to the fire that has been ignited within BOTH of them!

And let's be clear, Matt is not just using Summer for sex; you can tell that he has loved and desired her for years – at least we know he cares for her in that noticed the sadness in her eyes whereas someone else would have never caught it! So, even though she doesn’t like him, Matt’s only using sex as a way to awaken her feelings for him!! And hey, in marriage, she can bloody well respond to, and give in to him over and over again without shame because she is his WIFE! Okay?!!

I also love how the author has woven an enduring relationship into this story by having Matt state that he's "in this for the long haul" - referring to his marriage plans, not the business transaction! Good one! Even Summer understands this concept of permanence by her statement: “She would have to learn to live with her decision or she would never get any sleep, not for the rest of her life.” Since both Matt and Summer come from families with intact marriages, it only makes sense that they would think in terms of the example that their parents set for them!

So yes, “Summer knew in her head that she had done the right thing, marrying Matt was the right thing...” And if the story goes the way I hope, she will know this in her heart as well!

Okay Curiousmuse:

I can see this story line going one of two ways: The parents will not be as happy as this new couple thinks, i.e., one or both sets of parents are actually racists but that will only serve as a unifying force so that Matt and Summer will fight for their marriage in light of this surprising opposition. Or some other turmoil will happen (not pregnancy) that causes Summer to realize that Matt really is the man of her dreams – I don’t know how you’re going to work this out.

But here’s the thing, if you don’t finish this great story soon, I’m going to finish it for you because either way, we can’t be left hanging like this! lol

It could use a couple more chapters.

Really? So if you don't marry you should never have sex? Wow......just wow.

Really hot!

I love these chapters I need and want so much more, I wish it were a book i love matt being white and summer being black that is my fantasy being as i am a black woman and mostly attracted to white men. Bring back more chapters. Thank you

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrre......please?

So wishing that you would come back and finish this story.

...want more.

makes it a "really liked it, keep writing" aka 3 star. Magnificent work, but leaving it unfinished makes it less than unsatisfactory. Come back to it, and you could finish what promises to be an exquisite love story. I may have to finish it myself, though undoubtedly with a different style and no idea regarding the ending. ;P

PS: anyone who has a problem with reviewers who haven't published stories/directed films themselves, I have a single question for you- how many films did Roger Ebert direct? Write? None? Oh dear. You look quite the fool now, don't you? But then you must be used to looking like a fool, if you express opinions like "only writers can critique writers!!!11!!" on a regular basis. Ciao amici! ;)

I'm glad I checked before starting the chapters for this story, seeing as how its been left unfinished. Nothing worse than getting invested in a good story only to find that it is unfinished. I'll wait to see if there's an update from the author before starting this series. Thanks.

Please update your readers as to whether you intend to continue this story. It oseems like the its always the really good stories that are left unfinished, with no update from the author. It's not fair to ask readers to become invested in your writing only to not update us on your future intentions for the story. It's completely understandable if life has become too hectic such that it doesn't leave room for writing, just please let us know so we don't keep having to check back. Sorry if I'm coming across as rude... Its not my intention. Just a testament to your writing talent.

Much appreciated!

If you are not dead and have not lost the physical ability to write, please finish this. It's obvious from the comments that every reader was intrigued so please please please continue the story.

Please finish this story

Seriously, where you is the rest????!!!

First we are baited into reading, then we are not granted a continuation of the story. I understand life happens, but it's just cruel to leave people hanging on by a thread. I only mentioned this because you had such a great start. My attention is not so easily obtained. Don't tease us readers without plans of following through with this story.

You hooked us, threw us a line...

Complete the story puhleeeeezzzz!!!!

CAN YOU JUST FINISH THIS PLEASE

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interesting & engaging .. intriguing & entertaining plot

somewhat weak protagonists & Dialogue

not sure why 152 pple have favorited the story

worth a 4 star

Sad to say another one left unfinished.

Get an editor.

You have to continue please

All the time when he says no some how mean yes in this story. And why can't she just fucking stand up for herself. Stories like this are so unrealistic it's like fucking fantasy

People saying how mentally strong she is but how is she when she always gives in. And that entitled son of a bitch ugh I hate him. Why does stories always portray black women like this

To me it's not even consensual, don't mistake blackmail for consent. Why can't he just do a sensible thing and court her. And people are praising this white man for "taking what he wants" he's giving off this white supremacist type vibe the way he went about it. Dude she's fucking afraid of him but still thinks he has a right to touch her, as a black woman im disgusted. That's your alpha. Really? What makes him so different from a rapist? Not much of at all.

People saying how he loves her. How? How? Fucking someone is not love. People are mistaking lust for love. just because you notice someone is sad doesn't mean you love them either some people are observant others just easy to read. The way their relationship is reminds me of slavery. The way white men would took black women from their homes and the life that they had and started raping them. Matt was fucking strategic about this, waited years for the right opportunity just so he could take her and fuck her. And people acting like this nigga is fucking Prince Charming. No this is modern slavery

Got to continue

Parents reception

Power and compatable lust dynamic

Hate tension ... falling in love with his hidden affection for her

Learming to let go... his need for affection...

Growing in power at work... letting go at home

Success together

Back in france... falling in love with the boy

Renewed public vows

Babies... ever after

I am definitely enjoying this story. I keep coming back to read it. I really wish you would finish it. We need answers!

My, my, this ought to be one of the best stories I have read. From the first chapter to where you stopped; it's incredible, lovely. Pls do not keep us waiting for the remaining chapter or chapters for too long.

I've been waiting. This story is interesting. I love the back and forth relationship between Matt and Summer. You can see it turning into something other then business and sex. So continue the story please.

When can we expect the next chapter and the ending?

Summer needs to stop fighting it and roll with Matt. This is cute and sweet and very erotic. Best wishes to the newly wed lol. Looking forward to reading what happens next with these two love birds. There's gotta be a twist or kink or something because the story's to perfect. Very rarely do you get to have it all neatly packaged. Some drama and more sex is always a winnah winnah chicken dinnah. Thanks for hooking us up with Summer & Matthew. I'm restlessly waiting for the next chapter.

Would love a happy ending

That can’t be it, right? I know that you aren’t going to leave me on edge like this. I would like another part, please.

Omg mooooooore!!!!!! Don’t keep me in suspense.

He should have licked his fingers moaned and close his eyes on the way out for her to see

I agree that he should have licked his fingers while backing out of the office. But I really just want this to continue. So hot. I absolutely cannot.

Not to sound morbid but do you think the author is dead? It’s been eleven years! Maybe it’s not finished because she physically can’t?

Ms. Mam, you really need to finish this story!!!

Great start. Good back story . Where do you go from here? Nice black and white touch. Needs exciting finish.

Great start as mentioned earlier. Would love an ending.

Encore!!!

Please come back to this story and complete it...give Summer and a full story

omg please finish the story....

I’ve decided the author is now a victim of the C***** virus and will never return. Like I really think she passed away and we’re asking a ghost to complete this story.

Please finish thus story

Probably "life happened" for the author. Really sorry for that, this is a good story.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Maybe someone else could finish???

Needs a conclusion!

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Sexcellent Series!

11/10!!!!!

It's actually interesting waiting for part 3 pls

4/5

It would be 5/5 if not abandoned