All Comments on 'Higher Power'

by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Almost

You are trying too hard-cut some of the wit and polish the story instead

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Over the top is sooo appropriate for this contest!

From pathetic single to smokin' sex in public, this is PERFECT for V Day!! Thank you!!!

(from another eternally optimistic pathetic single!!) :)

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