The School Hunk Ch. 02

wish there was more

i read a new submission of yours today. It led me to your other entries. I really enjoyed this one & I hope more still to come.

why stop there?

i like the story and i'd love to read more....come on post more...if you want or need ideas i have a few...but i'm no write!

pretty good for a sequel. i hope theres more

I want more!!!!!

Great start but you should make the chapters a little longer. Don't worry, though. It's great so far and look forward to reading more!

A Great Start

You have made a great start to what I hope becomes an epic story. The possibilities are numerous. Dealing with the rumors is one obstacle the couple must overcome. They also need to get to know each other better. Tracy seems to have, understandably, an issue with insecurity and lack of self confidence so her growth in those areas could be one theme to explore. In addition of course is the conflict you have already started with the mean girls.

I hope you continue this very promising story.

You have to keep the stories coming!!! There is so much left for you to write about!!!!!

More?

Please continue!

This is such a great story. Its so on point. Its not like such plot have not been written before, but your take on it and some X factor that you have has made it so captivating! Please continue....
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