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Without Remorse Ch. 10

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/12/10

Great

Gritty, realistic and sad. There were no winners here.

Boyd

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by Anonymous10/25/10

Wish Jake would have lived.

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by ladybug7107/05/11

Wasn't expecting this ending....

I was hoping that Mike got shot in his groin; that Kelly and Ben had gotten together after the big trial; and that Jake would've gotten to live a long life. :-(

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by Ghinikha08/05/16

I dont understand how or why Jake was killed

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