Angie's Valentines Baby

Great Story

I am such a fan of your stories Jim. Keep writing ... please.

good story

only thing i can say that really sucks is not being able to be with your own kids and a woman you love. otherwise, id say it turned out really well for everybody. well keep up the good stories i look forward to reading angie's side of the conversation that night with her brother.

mixed thoughts.

Story made me hot and bothered. So good writing,
However if it's true, it's sad and messed up. If it's not and you just wanted attention or whatever that's fine.

Personally I don't believe it. I'm rating it a 4 star because it was hot and that's what good writing is about.

Dicks

Your story was incredible. All of them are. Everyone who has dissed your writing is just jealous that they can never write like you. All your stories get me so wet. So ht and makes me finger myself like crazy. Don't listen to those who think they can put you down with their words. They can't your a great writer. And I live all of them and the characters big cocks. God I love cock. Keep writing please do.

A mindless diarrhea of demented asshole !

Its one of those asylum "writers" for asylum inmates !

great writing

love your stories.great reads-all except oneu guess. 5 stars

So hot

Wish you would give Me your baby too

Great story

The was a great story. I quote your writing here, "In great detail. But I promised Angie that I wouldn't write what she told me that night. She told me she's planning on eventually writing the story and submitting it to Literotica herself. So you'll have to wait a bit for all the juicy details. And they are juicy. "Well did she write the story???

more more more

I love the way you build this story, wonderful technique and well written. did anglica write her story and if so could you tell me her authors name she uses? thanks

To each their own.

Obviously some people love this story. However, I read less than 1/3 of page one before skipping to the end and rating it 1*.

Provided the guy is nice about it, I don't have any objecting to reading about a women having sex with a superior male in order to select the best genes for her egg and to have a prettier baby. And, provided her husband never finds out, that may be doing him a favor. It is certainly good for our species for women to select the best available genes for their eggs.

However, I could tell within the first few pargraphs that this story is abouty an inconsiderate selfish bragging predator. Although the bragging may be author bragging to the readers via of the character in the story. I dislike that type of person so I stopped reading and gave the story the lowest possible rating.

DWmoroncok, shit for brains cop-hating closet queer?

Can probably tack on ADD, mentally deficient, and dumb as a post.

nice style

but for the most part I dont like the idea of a husband raising her lover child. "Lucky Man" how, his wife is a slut and no matter what the author says it's true. If a man has a baby with another woman, it's impossible for his wife to think it's his. But a woman can get fucked by the USMC, I mean all of the corp. and the husband would still get the honor of raising a bastard child and some how this is sexy...NOT. She's a slut and your an asshole.

NICE

KEEP UP THIS DIARY TYPE STORY I LOVE TRUE STORIES THNKS FOR SHARING

I do not believe the story to be true assuming that the stated time frame is correct. Given the fact that the affair started in February, 2009 and that scouries got his feedback in his 'latest story' as he puts it in April to learn that she was 10 weeks pregnant, I gather that the 'latest story' must have been written beetween February and April of 2009. But after crosschecking I did not get any feedback implying someone to have been pregnant.

Thank God it is not true, its one thing to contemplate fantasies than to perform them in real life. And yes, despite the very fact that I enjoy reading these fantasy stories very much, I cringe at the very thought of giving them lives.

LOVE LOVE LOVE

I dont care what anyone else says this story is absolutly amazing...... it keeps you hanging but reading its a great story even if morally warped its really good I'd love to read more... on my way to read more now THANK YOU

First Timer

I've been a constant reader of Lit for many years now but this is the first story of yours that I've come across. It's a rare thing to find a gem of a writer, especially one that touches on the specific kinks that occupy the majority of my time. You are such a gem. Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant angle

I loved the whole storyline different and exceedingly captivating, more please in similar vain?

Thank You

Thank you for your comments at the beginning. I was able to skip this one and not waste my time. I really hope it is not true, however I already suspected that you were a serial adulterer based on some of your other writings. It is a sad commentary on our society when so many cheer you on. If not now, sometime in the future, those marriages you impact will fall apart and in many cases it will be because of your actions. Be careful, Karma is a bitch.

The best yet ! Read almost all of your stories :)

hmm

I always enjoy all of your stories. Thank you for writing them and having the balls to publish them here.

Romantic and nice if a little sad...

Can't win them all. I have just lost my lover of over 14 years, that damn "we can just be friends" crap. Of course, she is 21 years younger and wants someone who can be with her more often and longer. Such is life. The strong can survive, even if it hurts. Please keep writing.

Sad about the bitch and others!!!

Hi Jim, I have read quite a few of your stories and unfortunately was unable to post comments as my android has a problem displaying the full message screen.

However I feel compelled to add my "two pence worth", (cents in the States).

I think all of your stories which I have read; to date; are very well crafted, often emotive, always sensual and usually demonstrate some degree of sensitivity. Angies Valentine Baby was to my mind, one such tale.

Sadly, some of the commentators feel the need to comment in a negative and somewhat destructive manner, not only on your submissions but; it would appear; on almost everything they read. My advice to them is simple. If you do not like the heat, stay out of the kitchen! I have also noted that many of the gainsayers are "Anonymous", shame on you, if you are bold enough to post negativistic comments, at least have the balls to put your name to them! Others; those who do post as users; have very blank profiles, barely any personal details, no publications and not even a single favourite. O.K. That is my little rant over, I thought of sending this as a private comment, however I think it should be in the public forum.

Good luck to you, I look forward to reading many more of your stories and hope you will continue to write many more, you are an excellent author. Keep up the good work.

Den U.K.

i wish it was me

Not sure which part I would play. Great story

Thanks Jim

I loved the journey and am curious if more baby making journeys will be written about.
This was a great one.

I LOVE the stories!!! Thanks you and looking forward to a few sequels.

Your stories are riveting and capture my attention. Again thank you and look forward to reading more.

fuck slut cheating whore

put a bullet between her skank.eyes.

"Angie's Valentines Baby" - James "Jim" and Angelique

Although I do highly believe in fidelity to one's spouse or committed hetrosexual relationships (or mates in the small world of latent homosexual couples), this story has the necessary, unadulterated respect, honor, feelings and caring for each other to make the story exotic and romantic!! Also, the possibility that Angie's husband Paul might be "weak-spermed" allows Angie's to enjoy the monumental blessings of total motherhood, and her husband Paul to believe he's man enough to father children!

The wooing, foreplay and fucking of Jim and Angie was not animalistic in nature, but done with compassion and love and mutual respect for each other--the way the sex act should be consummated and the female impregnated! The story conveys the real and true ways and methods of sexual pursuit through the complete and total acts of impregnation, not once but several more times. Hopefully Angie's brother Johnnie has contributed at least once to Angie's several children.

I'm with cantbuymy...

Definitely hot scenes but I despise cheating wives, and I especially despise their lovers.

hot

She's so very lucky. She is fortunate to be able to have the husband she loves, and children by a man who'll respect him as the father. Scouries knows her husband will probably make the better dad. Scouries will give them all the kids they want. And she gets to love her brother as all sisters should but rarely do. Maybe brother will save their marriage someday when Paul can no longer service her needs. She gets a lover who is not a possessive homewrecker, a loving husband and father to spend her life with and raise children with, and her brother as lifetime lover/confidante so she'll never be tempted to stray farther as her whole family loves Paul too. A job selling beautiful lingerie and, no doubt, able to purchase it at an employee discount. They have a nice home with his more than sufficient income, though he does have to spend too much time away for business. Who can claim that she doesn't have the perfect life? Maybe Paul'l meet Scouries' sister someday at another seminar and complete the circle of Lovers. Angie could seduce Johnnie's wife just for variety also. Great story.

Loved it, thank you for sharing your stories.

the kind of story that pulls you along

wondering where it is going next. and it was an interesting and enticing journey.

the comments were almost as entertaining as the narrative. compelling were the number of authors who wrote praising this tale. high praise indeed.
one aspect of a comment section that always amuses me is finding a reference to a previous post that is no longer there. lol

Great read!!

I have 2 thoughts of mind on this subject and they're polar opposites.. On the one hand I've been cheated on more than once and it almost broke up our marriage, but then we've had fertility issues too that almost broke us up too!! To the previous commenters about cheating wives do you condone cheating husbands as much as wives or are you sexist?? I think they are equally wrong but to give a couple the gift that the husband couldn't as long as he never finds out could've saved the marriage too!!

DNA test laboratory advertising story

There are spermbanks. The looking for a strangers who resemles to the husband and to breed with him a baby is XIX Century solution. More and more husbands discover to check secretly the kids with DNA test. It may be the authors of similar stories get money for promotion DNA test laboratories from any association of the laboratories.

Typical --

About average for scouries' stories. That's pretty good. Not too much character development or really hot, explicit sex. Not really sure how the guy has so much success with sexy women -- mostly what I see is a huge cock and plenty of chutzpah. Wonder whether the husband will ever find about the babies?

prodigious!

Jim, I just like your work. Period. I wish I knew what 'Angelique' wrote under so I could read her part of this tale. Don't know how many times I've read this, its always good. There should be no naysayers here. Angelique has a wonderful couple of days. She missed so very much by marrying a man four years older than her when she was so young. And parents need to stay out of the decision process, besides, as a father of daughters I know that the father is supposed to hate all men who come sniffing around his little princesses. Angelique gives Paul through Jim what he could never have had. A family. He'll make a better dad than a Scouries would. And she finally acknowledges her love for Johnnie. And where does that go? Did she wear the 'special' lingerie for him? There's more here. Just tell us what name she writes under.

no banks

Paul will never have DNA checks done. He would have to acknowledge that his sperm couldn't get to Angelique's eggs. He might have to admit to himself his own infertility. He is happy, he is not a cuckold. He is a real husband and a good father. Jim just comes around every few months and gives her another baby, and aquires material for another chapter in the story of Angie in the Lingerie Shop. Angie becomes a good mother and loving wife who never steps out of her family for loving except when Scouries comes to town for another baby. So, she finally tells Johnny of her love for him. On Valentines night she seduces him wearing the black set Jim left her. Of course she's already pregnant. There is no murder here. Unlike most unfaithful wives or husbands, she deeply loves all three of her men. Her marriage could have gone stale and ended. She was too young and full of dreams to have an infertile husband, so, scouries probably saved their relationship.

Valentines?

Mix together a slutty, cheating wife, a clueless husband and a predator with no morals and presto, its a Valentines Day story. Yeah, right. Sorry, just does not work for me.

Wow!

i too am in love with Angie and you can tell her I said so. I'm a little uncomfortable with the pressure you put her through but I suspect she's got memories aplenty to keep her warm on lonely nights. Assuming the business of her writing her own story was not just a bit of literary license, I'd really like to know the name under which she published. Good job!!

golly

everybody wins here. its truly a happily ever after story. scouries gives angelique more babies, paul is a good daddy who never finds out. johnny makes love to his sister. angie has more men than she could have ever dreamed of and they're all sniffing at her sex when they are around her. she loves her brother, but doesn't want his baby. she wants all of her babies to have the same father. i really wish you would write here in the comments section what angelique's pen name is and what we should look for her under on literotica. i want to read her story of Johnny and others. maybe she writes about the older author who comes in the store and takes her in the dressing room after the store is closed. maybe she tells the story of how she fell in love with her little brother. she hears him early one morning stroking his large morning erection and sneaks down the hall to watch. shocked at the amount of semen he produces and shoots into the air with his face in a grimace of pleasure/pain while calling out only one name. "Angie"!! johnny cries as he shoots and she orgasms having touched herself not even once.

Valentine Baby

Love in bloom on February 14 - Lover's Day. What is better than the sky holding five gold stars to light the story of love and parenthood?

Cool Story

Loving. erotic, and genuine. You are in love with this woman and she you.

More! I want more of them.

I loved how you used yourself, as in first person account from the author's point of view, to make this story seem real. It adds a kind of... how do I put it... 'excitement', 'allure'... umm... mystery. :) As though am reading someone's secret dairy. It makes me feel the story is real even when I very well know that it's as likely to be a work of pure fiction. Nice strategy Mr. Author. :) Kudos!

Oh! and I liked how the story proceeded. Do we see a part two of it? Please!

One more thing... I always wonder while leaving comments, do authors read the viewer comments? How do they feel about it? Do they respond? Do they shake their head and think to themselves... 'Haa!! another lame fan'. I sometimes feel it would be nice to read what the author feels reading the comments and compliments. :) Like an insight into their minds.

Do write a second part if it's not already written. In the meanwhile... I'll go and read your other stories. :)