Angie's Valentines Baby

a great erotic story despite the fact that i discovered i was an infertile man myself 23 years ago

How can u put this in a valentine contest???

there isn't loving at all of that wife. For a cuckold story is fine and all but putting this in a valentines contest??? You must be kidding!!!!

And I do pity Paul, because it looks like his wife is a fucking cake eater who is eventually gonna cuckold him with 4 children, while taking a lover by her side. Again, what is so loving about this tale? If this was only once I could pass it, but she will make him take care of four bastards and keep a lover, what is that SOOO loving?

I repeat again, for those who love cheating wives is a good tale, but making it into romance? If this what people see as love then man, what has society grown into?

Great Story

Can see a few follow-ups if your going to do 4 kids. alot of Vacations in Chicago and Wisc. Glad to see your "Back"

A great story from a great author

Very much up to your excellent standards. Thanks!

master storyteller best effort

There are writers, pretenders, and then there are real writers. I hope the rest of you scribes, hacks, really, take notice of the master storyteller.

This was one of your best efforts, Sir Scouries.

deep, dark, and dangerous waters of...loving wives.

I always enjoy reading your submissions. I must confess that I was surprised that you didn't write an incest story. You are brave to weather the deep, dark, and dangerous waters of...loving wives.

Some writers who dare submit a story there, never write another.

Good luck in the contest.

yet another outstanding read

I've missed your stories but you've come back strong with this one. An OUTSTANDING story and an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work and don't make us wait so long before the next one.

Lucky Indeed

Good Writing but as far as her husband being lucky. That always has to be the most idiotic shit in these type stories. how the fuck anyone could figure how lucky the husband of this adulteress was, is far from my reasoning process. I can think about 1 1/2 million reasons (dollars) for him to be the unluckiest son of a bitch on the planet by the time he gets her bastard raised from birth to adulthood. After that, if she is like most fucking women, she will get pissed off in a fit of rage later on in life and spring it on him that he is not the father of her bastard and any other kids she will have later. Women like her who cheat will god damned sure repeat her performance. The guy cumming on her husband's picture is just a prelude of what is to come later after he eats the bitch with a load of cum in her whoring cunt. The best thing could happen to her would have been after she was knocked up the first time that her bastard was stillborn and her innards were fucked up where she couldn't have anymore bastards for her husband to spend millions on raising. I Know a lot of men will be tickled pink by a story like this but as far as I am concerned Paul is about as lucky as some poor fucking soldier that has just stepped on an IED. As far as the brother , that's just fucking sick.

GREAT

Once again, you have outdone yourself. Not only an enjoyable story but one most of us can see happening in real life. A young, beautiful, impressionable girl swept off her feet by a silver tounged devil! You have merged love, lust, naiveté and cheating into a wonderfully entertaining and belivable story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to at least 4 more as he impregnates her again and again!

What are you really?

It appears that your are just one large pile of human shit.

Excellent

Man, this was just sooo good.
The seduction was masterful. The characters likable. You even made the subject matter likable.
Bravo. A well written story within a story.

hey guys don't worry, they will get it in the end

just sad for the kids when everything comes out. They will have to suffer cause too adults are to stupid to think. For instance in most states now schools take DNA from the parents in case of accidents for insurance reasons. well hello , divorce , poverty, no family, violance, mobbing at school . you name it just for a couple minutes of fun ? really erotic and a nice valentines gift too.

Another bad story...

I saw this while browsing through the Valentine's Day Contest page and I decided to see if your writing has improved. If anything its gotten worse. In addition, you seem to think you are some kind of best-selling author, but you are not.

Once again, the characters are flat and the dialogue is cliche and dull. And what's worse, not only do you still feel the need to repeat letters, but you do it throughout the entire story.

The next time I see another of your stories I will skip it. You have proven yourself to be a poor writer with little or no creativity or skill.

Great!!

You kept the story going at just the right pace and added a great finish to the story.

What sort of bullshit is this?

A Valentines story about a whore/slut/bitch and you the writer, the so called hero of the story, you sir are an arsehole. Paul isn't lucky, if anyone thinks that being cucked by your wife and then forced to bring up 4 little bastards as your own? and then one day you find out your wife is not only fucking and arsehole but also fucking her brother. That is just sick. If this is your best work then I hate to even think about what your worst would be. This the first and last story of yours I will read. I really hope you don't even get close to winning the contest.

it's fantasy --- take it as such

wow, such a scathing comment just a little before mine.

scouries writes stroke-story fantasies. This is another one and a good one. The torch-the-bitch crowd should park their egos and their injured self-righteousness before reading a scouries story.

Hey, I've written some pretty good stuff on here. Think if I walked into a Victoria's Secret store I could convince a sexy teenager to do the dirty?

Yeah, right. That's why it's a fantasy.

Blah, blah, blah.... It's a fucking story, you idiots. If you don't like it, don't read it. Why do morons come here to complain and chastise. Oh, wait, I've answered my own question, haven't I!

you are right

she is a tramp of a mother and is not worth having anymore children. My god man, she is a married woman. If you don't have any respect for yourself, have some respect for her and her daughter.

Truth is indeed stranger than fiction

Wait until the tabloids get wind of this. Many loving wives will be coming forth confessing to having extramarital affairs (and babies) with Literotica's most famous author. I predict this is only the tip of the iceberg. I gave you 5 stars, scouries, for being so brutally honest and doing it in such an erotically entertaining way.

nicely done, an enjoyable read.

its been quite a while since ive read scouries stories, i enjoyed this one. delightful fantasy with the promise of further dalliances. on a more sobering note, lets leave the men and women of our armed forces out of the discussion. that comment was the most crass, unnecessary and degrading towards people who are willing to make the ultimate sacrifice. lee

WOW-Reminded of "Naughty Teen & Fiances Grandfather" by Shoguy

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.My favorite writer on this site is Shoguy. Her stories burn with HEAT!! Older men with huge cocks (12-15 inches) with strong confidence(because of their enormous size) are the key to her stories. No one wants to read about an 'average' sized guy--we want giant and her stories are loaded with self-confident-powerful men and the young teens or MILF'S that they always attract. She also uses more imagery with thigh high stockings and high heels. Those images burn a hole in your mind! Good work-but you have to read Shoguy's stories!

braggard

would have liked it better if the writer wouldnt brag that much by trying to make the reader belive hes a rich and handsome seducer of gorgeous babes, lol. It just gives it some bad by- taste (if thats an english term)

Kudos

About time somebody wrote a Loving Wives category story about something besides mindless drivel. That "Dug Two Graves" series so popular amongst the Loving Wives m(asses) is totally pathetic.

So okay already

This story made even me hot and bothered.

Probably my favorite of yours.

Kind of a different twist for you...

But, like all of your stories, I found it very entertaining. I always appreciate what you do. You've been on my "Favorites List" for a long time, Jim. Keep doing what you do.

Nice work

An entertaining and immersive story! Your beginning and ending however create some difficulty in creating the trust that your narrative seems to desire. Your "Literotica" twist is slightly implausible and perhaps would be better left to a vague "romance novelist" idea. Furthermore, if the encounter itself were left on its own it might create more of the mystery of the fiction- even up to the heroine talking about her brother. These are meant to be constructive comments so please take them (as they are) as subjective ideas to strengthen your story. Your fluidity of expression and use of varied and interesting phrases are some of the better I have seen on this site - keep up the good work!

Loved the story!

Great read. You are a great writer and one of 3 favorites here on Literotica.
I enjoyed the story line of an author meeting a beautiful young wife and getting into dressing the heroine in the story for a lover. A quote from my favorite Sci-Fi author Robert Heinlein writing as Lazarus, "The more you love the more you can love-and the more intensely you love. Nor is there any limit on how many you can love. If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just." I really like incest stories because the love seems so much more real. Thanks for a really good Valentines story.
Love and enjoy loving for a long time, sweetolbill

what a moron

This uathor has to be a moron. Almost totally every sentence has to contain "..." it reached the eye strain level in the first few paragraphs.

Same time next year.....

This reminded me of the movie "Same time next year" where the couple meets yearly in the same location for years. They have a loving, caring relationship with each other as well as their own spouses. In this case, he doesn't share as much of his other life as she has, but it still is a nice story.

Wicked is good

It's a nice read. Like all good seductions, it has her slowly growing willingness and lovely turn of phrase. What occurs in her head precedes the physical reality. What follows in the best stories is love.

What has Love got to do with this story?

Equally what has Valentines day got to do with this story?

It's a story readers

Great story Jim.For some reason in loving wives, readers seemed surprised to find marriages where one or both partners cheat. I enjoyed the story and wish you the best in the contest.
DG

loved the story within the story aspect...

lovely twists, engaging and on the edge.. another great one Jim.... thanks

Good story like your insect ones the best but with this little twist in it this one is a good one as well

Wonderful!!

You are awesome Jimmie baby!! Fabulous as always!!

Well done.

I for the most part hate anything that has to do with cheating, however this is a wonderful story and if it is true as you clame you are now my hero... giving a man a family and getting the girl both... you are eather a devil or a saint...

Loved it.

Love the story. So erotic and yet so loving. That is one lucky woman to have you in her life and bed.

I Just Wrote a Comment and It Disappeared Before I Could Post It, So Now I Need

to start over. Well, this will be shorter. I don't really recall all of the details as it has been several days since I read the story, but I know that I enjoyed the eroticism, the good sex, the exaggeration (I don't believe for a minute that this was real), and the plot. In sex it is a matter of fact that the best man will win. In this story, the storyteller was the winner, just as it should be. Not much love here or reason to celebrate Valentine's Day, but as a sexual story, it was a winner to me and for me. I'm looking forward to more of Jim's sexual wonders. Just think I'm still on the letter A!

Love huh?

If this is Love ... Then its crazy, cool, erotic, mindblowing, pathetic, sad ... and much more which my vocabulary wont be able to put it in.

awwwwwwwww

i have always loved your stories and this one is great!!!! i know that if i ever met you in person my mind would be blown!!! she is one lucky girl and you are undoubtedly one hell of a lucky guy and fairly brilliant...great great great story!

Lost and found

No intention of pointing out grammatical opinions - this is love with courage and an oversexed author. But, not without feeling and romance.

It's about people relating to one another - probably the most important feature.

But most of all it is about freedom from guilt. Wonder how many decades before it will be acceptable.

Encore! Encore! Encore!

Angie

What a great story. Felt like I was there watching! Thanks.

Lovely story

I'm not one for adultery in real life, I've always been kind of oldfashioned in my thinking regarding it, but I loved this story, it was sweet, and incredibly erotic at the same time. A wonderful piece of erotica, as usual, from a very gifted writer (and if this were true, a very lucky one, too)

This is the best story I have read till now. It was very lovely. I have always appreciated you and this story of yours is even better than the ones I have read till now. You narrated it really well and drew me into the story. You are just amazing.

What a mindless arogant prattle!!

One of the worst ever. "author" obviously loves to hear himself.

WOW!

Another typical Scouries story; well written inhabited by believable people - okay! That's bit of a stretch.
Good one.
Enjoyed every stroke of it!

Great, as usual

Ok, I'm against cheating but this story is not about that, but about love (or lust) at first sight. Perfect, loved it!
And for that JERK who hated it because ""author" obviously loves to hear himself.", well, teachers always say: write about what you know, something close, so my 5 stars go to you as usual

A Good story

but with this kind of love, I would hate to be in the husbands shoes

A mindless self serving prattle by arogant prick !!

With NO writing talents at all ! Absolutely worthless and asinine !