All Comments on 'Winter Of Angela'

I don't usually comment on the stories I read. I just wanted to say that this is the most erotic well written LOVE story I have ever read. Thank you for writing it.

and hot!

Very well written, good pacing and the sex is supurb. Kudos!

I add to a previous comment. Very well written and one of the best so far, mabe even the best. We/I need more of your stories...;>)

Consider not putting MOVIE TITLES in caps all the fucking time. It gets annoying very quickly. Other than that it's a great story. but no more MOVIE TITLES in caps please.

I enjoy reading stories of lesbian love and this is one of the best I've read so far. Well paced lead up to the climax and what a climax! The detail in Emma and Angela eating each other out was well done. Just let your imagination run wild with detail on the sex scenes. Hope you have more stories of sapphic love waiting to be written! Thanks for your literary work, well done!

Excellent writing, would love to read more of your work, please!

This is the best that I have read. a gradual build up to a great finale. Please keep writing

This was a great story. The build up was slow and swee but the climax was well worth the wait. The story flowed so effortlessly it felt like I was reading an excerpt from a personal journal.

I hope this is a true story! It was absolutely beautiful. There's nothing more painful than unrequited love, and I was so happy in the end that it turned out to be the farthest thing from unrequited! Truthfully, I am in awe of this story.

This piece was exquisitely written. The ebb and flow of the storyline matched my aching libido. This is by far one of my favorite besides Captive Hearts due to the mesmerizing imagery and flawless grammer. There were no solecisms to detract from the plot you so expertly wove with searing depth, yet enough simplicity not to lose the reader with boring detail. I can only hope this love story is true.

An absolute pleasure to read, in every way. ~ L

:D woah.. i havent cum like that in a while. ;) thank you soo much for your amazing story! Absolutely beautiful, and amazing sex! perfect! :D xxx

great build up,slightly downbeat ending,but a very enjoyable read

TRULY AMAZING!!!

All your stories are a nice length with great character development and romance. The best I have read on this site or pretty much anywhere. Can't wait till the next story.

Best writer on this whole website, read everything you've done, fucking incredible

that was so sweet and romantic :D

I've read this a few times, then lost track of it...So glad that I've run across it again. Such a lovely build & flow, some delay tactics built in to delay the inevitable "sharing of mind, body & soul". They seemed so real; that I was heart-broken when it was stated that they went their separate ways - I can't imagine losing something that beautiful, Argh!!!

This "just like a few of your others" has now been bookmarked as another of my "All-Time Favorites"; and I'm a 50+ yo straight guy.

Thanks ... DKP

Are you still in touch with Angela? You should show her this, maybe spark up some old flames ? Loved the story

Now read all your stories. Beautifuly written. Thank you

The long but necessary road Angela and Emma need to take to arrive at the crossroad is exquisite reading, feelings and characters developing and growing towards each other. Beautiful, thank you!

this and all of your work is amazing!

Thank you!

L

Surprisingly this was an amazing story. The ending was really good.one of the best stories i have read on this site.

It's just coming up to my bedtime, so thanks for this lovely story to go to sleep on. It has a very good, slow-burning build-up and I particularly liked the ending. Although I'm a sucker for happy endings, this story's bittersweet finale is probably so much more like real life. Very well done, SP.

(The reader who moaned about film titles in block capitals is right---italics would be so much better.)

That was magical. So beautifully written and a delicious slow burner to two amazing climaxes. Fantastic

Excellent story, you have such a poetic writing style. Mix that with the great sex scenes and you have a winner of a story.

This story is a work of art. I know I'm hoping against hope, but another chapter with a reunion would be well worth reading, especially at the hands of such a wonderful writer. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

I love the story within a story as the girls watch Angela's favorite video. The pacing is great. The characters are irresistible and the dialogue is pitch perfect. Oh yeah, and the sex is off the chain. Everything I want to see in a story. I only wish you wrote more often.

The fear, romance, and love are so wonderful in this story. Thank you so much for writing it!

Why couldn't they stay together?! The story doesn't have a happy ending! 😢 But I loved it anyways! - Munro McLaren

If you want to answer back, mumclaren@gmail.com

This was a good story.

Skilfully constructed and beautifully expressed. My "favourite favourite".

Why couldn't they stay together? Why can't they get back together! I loved this! I wish there was a happy ending. Is this a true story?

I'm in love...with this story - and I love deep

Finely crafted with rich character development and the ring of truth, though I'm sure it's fiction. I had the feeling I got to know Emma a little better than Angela, which is just the way it should be since the story is told from Emma's POV. She couldn't possibly know what Angela is thinking or feeling beyond what Angela communicates both verbal and non-verbal. The way you handled that is part of the fine craftwomanship. Well done.

in the movie the two didnt stay together, same in your story[sadly] overall this was great

A beautiful story that's well-paced, sweet, and very sexy. We loved it.

Wait this is a movie?

In response to Leapyearbaby29, this story is not based on a film. An anonymous commentor wrote, "in the movie the two didnt stay together, same in your story[sadly]"

He or she was referring to the movie, "Roman Holiday", which was mentioned in my story.

Well written and very yummy! Thank you!

I am falling in love with your stories. I can’t wait to read them all, with the hopes of more to come. Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.

This is a wonderful story that reads like it's a real relationship. I love the slow build-up, the revealing dialogue, and of course the steamy love-making (much more than just sex). I definitely need more batteries for my favorite friend! The only sad note is that you seem to have backed away from writing erotica...or maybe just switched to another site(?) Seriously, girl, you have the talent to commercialize your writing. Please tell us if you now publish elsewhere.

I would have preferred a more drawn out and detailed ending.

Despite that kinda sad ending its still a really good story. Loved it!

outstanding

Wow, this was told So Very Well! It came across as honest and heartfelt.

Great build up, and once they got going, the sex was incredible

Good job! ;->

Excellent story.

Good well developed multi dimensional real characters.

A sad ending, but that adds to the authenticity.

Life is a series of goodbyes.

Lovely story. Really is! I imagine them getting together again one day, to help one or the other get through a loss or tragedy. if you ever consider a sequel, this would be wonderful.

I read a lot of stories and love the romantic build up. I love the uncertainty and tenderness. Often when the actual sex starts, I quickly get bored and skips until there is more 'story'. I didn't have to skip anything with your story, because the sex was an actual part of the narrative, rather than a hardcore interlude breaking up a porno. Every bit of it was touching and lovely. Thank you for sharing your story.

You have a gift, which others have described and celebrated in previous comments. In both "Like a Secret Being Told" and this one, you indulge the fantasy that two lesbian virgins can somehow chance upon the most sophisticated permutations of sapphic love in their first encounter. I invite you to pick up the theme again and this time show the fumblings and fits and starts that mark first experiences and, if you wish, show how over time their mutual explorations lead to more innovative and explosive adventures in lovemaking.

Such amazing writing, the feelings, the detail, the pacing. I loved it

One of the best stories on Lit.

well done hope your happy maybe you will write more someday you would have lots of fans be well happy and safe shayne

Magnificent!

Hi. A wonderful story that l could believe is true very sincere and a lovely love story hopefully you will write more. Thank you. Jakeped

Another nice story!

Thank you!

Detail makes this story special- each touch, each tingle, each slippery kiss and caress. Thanks!

shit that was hot, youn do have a way with words. hmmmm five stars

One of my favourite stories to revisit. I don't think there is anything missing in this story. Thank you.