All Comments on 'Executive Platinum Ch. 05'

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Gary13 about 14 years ago

Ben, you are SUCH a good writer, storyteller!!

This latest is superb! Thanks for sharing your stories with your fans. I'm extremely proud - and I hope you'll let me look over Chapter Six when it's ready to post. That better be soon!

BOSTONFICTIONWRITER about 14 years ago

The dialogue is what draws you in the story and keeps you interested, along with the little details here and there. The whole story is professionally done. The writer never intrudes to jolt the reader out of the story. Very erotic sex scenes.

tazz317 almost 12 years ago

BUILDING ON A FOUNDATION

trying for a highrise condo. TK U MLJ LV NV

jurasick about 9 years ago

One question

Assuming they went to the pool with just a towel or two, I was wondering where they left the keys to their room. Just thought I'd check!

Rambling_Chantrix over 3 years ago

That was a fun twist with Gloria's attitude toward Melissa. I was wondering how this story would keep up steam for 20 chapters, but I'm not worried anymore :)

dommasterjim about 1 year ago

YESSSSSSSssss

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Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.

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