Reminds me of a story I read sometime ago where a mother and son were helping his aunt (her sister) move, and there was no room in the truck so the mother had to ride on the sons lap, and well the rest just gets better. Got great reviews, and while I don't recall the author/name of the story, I am sure someone can clue you in on that one assuming you have not read it before.
It means a lot that people enjoy this story, I read one like this a year or so ago but have not been able to find it since. What really means the most is this is the first, very first story I have ever written for anyone. I am currently thinking of more stuff to write down. Between college and this I have a full load (no puns, really.) I will try and see what is next in the erotic world for all involved. Thanks once again.
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Anonymous02/15/10
The similarly themed story
The similarly themed story was "Mom Takes a Ride" by NakdSalr
is what made this story erotic. If this is your first story, you did rather well, and the reviews seem to suggest that you have talent for writing erotica. Thanks for writing. You got my vote.
but she agreed to mutually split with him? I understand getting the dad out of the way but a regular divorce would have been fine. My pet peeve... it's THAN not thEn. It truly ruins a story for me when i see then used instead of than.
Wow, can you imagine the excitement this boy had screwing his own mother and then mom letting him fill her pussy with seed----awesome!
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Anonymous03/09/10
Fantastic, one of the best, I'v read in a long time.
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Anonymous05/11/11
Why can no one who writes at this website deal with the objective versus the subjective uses of "I" and "me"? You all fancy yourselves writers, but you have no sense that the objective sense uses "I" and the subjective sense uses "me." He went with you and me, not he went with you and I. I am going to the fair with you. You are going to the fair with me. Get it. . . Duh.
Whi gives a fuck about good english writing..
This is a story with a didderence & very sexy & had me horny.
Good writing, I dodn't care about grammatical errors.
Should be Ch 2 with Tina joining in!!
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Anonymous10/30/11
Nit picking ?
I read this site to become aroused...IF I wanted to concern myself with grammar, and I or ME, I'd go to a damned grammarian and seek help...I don't know what the problem is with some folks, but if you can't stand bad writing, why are you even on this site ? I love the story, I love the bad grammar, I love the good sneaky fuck, I love that mama would probably end up having sex with her best friend, if the friend realized what was happening...I do know the difference of " I " and " me " and it still comes back to fuck " YOU ."
Yeah, I can definitely overlook some grammar seeing as this story is a brilliant fantasy. It makes me cum pretty much every time I read it. It easily one of the best "mom sitting on son's lap" sex stories. I'll be honest, I've never had real sexual thoughts about my mother, but if I were in that guys spot, I'd go for it. I would rail the shit out of her pussy. This story definitely tapped into something in my brain.
Too bad, it was too short. They just got started, my question is ? . After that great lead in, what happen next ?. How did they explain to Tina, or did she just sit there with his cum running out of her already flowing cunt. There must be more, and i mean lots more. This was a good read but short. PLEASE COME BACK WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER. Put an end to this great start. What a waste not to finish............ ..........................LAROC OF AGES
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Anonymous06/02/13
Short and Sticky!
Delicious!!
I loved It!!!
Thank You.
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Anonymous06/05/13
This is a great story of hot motherfucking...
by a gifted writer still in his 30s. The commenter who wrote "nit-picking" is right--I don't appreciate readers who complain about some trivial grammatical or spelling mistake. In this excellent story, Tim is a good-looking well-built boy--his mom thinks he's "hunky"--and his mother's cunt leaks like a faucet when she looks him over. Mom especially likes the big bulge her boy's got in the front of his pants, and, sex-savvy lady that she is, she knows that what's lurking in her boy's pants can do her a world of good. It doesn't take Tim long to get with the program, he's been real interested in his mother's mommy-hole for quite a while. The inevitable happens, Tim's fine fat cock comes together with his mother's warm wet twat and Tim unloads his young balls up the very same cunt he came out of. And Tim does it again and again, as the boy becomes a grinning, smirking young motherfucker and his mother a smiling, contented son-fucked mom.
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Anonymous01/06/14
Write some more
Good plot and very stimulating. However, it stretches credulity to imagine that Tina would not find a mother sitting high up on her son's lap with her dress bunched up, rather unusual. That their orgasm, so intense, should pass with but an undetectable whimper is too fantastical.
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Anonymous01/16/14
agonizingly sexxy
Wow. I still have a tent in my pants!
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Anonymous05/11/15
Write more!
Good story! It has the potential of having several hot adventures. I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the near future… Especially expounding
from the story
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Anonymous06/23/15
I feel like I have had a cold shower . just 2 stop like that. help
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Anonymous09/01/15
Pool side
Good storie I have read it Many times and always makes me cum hard
Story doesn't make sense unless the friend knows what's happened, but ignore the nit pickers. They're wrong as this is fantasia, not some english literary educational establishment.
Otherwise it's well written, the right length and ends at the right place , perfect cliff hanger.
English
well done
Liked the story, and the action. It was a little different from the norm of Mother/son.
It is spelled "supposed".
Not "supose". The past tense takes an "ed" ending. Otherwise it is a very good story. More please.
so real and believable
i loved it, a real turn on for me, i know she had to have more of him
good story
Not bad, reminds me of a story
Reminds me of a story I read sometime ago where a mother and son were helping his aunt (her sister) move, and there was no room in the truck so the mother had to ride on the sons lap, and well the rest just gets better. Got great reviews, and while I don't recall the author/name of the story, I am sure someone can clue you in on that one assuming you have not read it before.
Good story
I hope to read more of this mom and son. Thanks
Hot!
Its so much better when stuff comes about in an unintentional accidental sort of way like this. Insanely sexy.
Great
That was a great story. You should continue it. It has a lot of potential to go in a few different directions.
Thanks!
It means a lot that people enjoy this story, I read one like this a year or so ago but have not been able to find it since. What really means the most is this is the first, very first story I have ever written for anyone. I am currently thinking of more stuff to write down. Between college and this I have a full load (no puns, really.) I will try and see what is next in the erotic world for all involved. Thanks once again.
The similarly themed story
The similarly themed story was "Mom Takes a Ride" by NakdSalr
Unplanned, spontaneous sex
is what made this story erotic. If this is your first story, you did rather well, and the reviews seem to suggest that you have talent for writing erotica. Thanks for writing. You got my vote.
great one
wow really hot story, plz continue thx
5/5
she loved his father to that day?
but she agreed to mutually split with him? I understand getting the dad out of the way but a regular divorce would have been fine. My pet peeve... it's THAN not thEn. It truly ruins a story for me when i see then used instead of than.
Well done
I really liked your story. It was quite erotic and pretty well described. Looking forward to more!
great
keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
screwing mom!
Wow, can you imagine the excitement this boy had screwing his own mother and then mom letting him fill her pussy with seed----awesome!
Fantastic, one of the best, I'v read in a long time.
Why can no one who writes at this website deal with the objective versus the subjective uses of "I" and "me"? You all fancy yourselves writers, but you have no sense that the objective sense uses "I" and the subjective sense uses "me." He went with you and me, not he went with you and I. I am going to the fair with you. You are going to the fair with me. Get it. . . Duh.
Very good
Whi gives a fuck about good english writing..
This is a story with a didderence & very sexy & had me horny.
Good writing, I dodn't care about grammatical errors.
Should be Ch 2 with Tina joining in!!
Nit picking ?
I read this site to become aroused...IF I wanted to concern myself with grammar, and I or ME, I'd go to a damned grammarian and seek help...I don't know what the problem is with some folks, but if you can't stand bad writing, why are you even on this site ? I love the story, I love the bad grammar, I love the good sneaky fuck, I love that mama would probably end up having sex with her best friend, if the friend realized what was happening...I do know the difference of " I " and " me " and it still comes back to fuck " YOU ."
Super hot!
Yeah, I can definitely overlook some grammar seeing as this story is a brilliant fantasy. It makes me cum pretty much every time I read it. It easily one of the best "mom sitting on son's lap" sex stories. I'll be honest, I've never had real sexual thoughts about my mother, but if I were in that guys spot, I'd go for it. I would rail the shit out of her pussy. This story definitely tapped into something in my brain.
Too Bad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too bad, it was too short. They just got started, my question is ? . After that great lead in, what happen next ?. How did they explain to Tina, or did she just sit there with his cum running out of her already flowing cunt. There must be more, and i mean lots more. This was a good read but short. PLEASE COME BACK WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER. Put an end to this great start. What a waste not to finish............ ..........................LAROC OF AGES
Short and Sticky!
Delicious!!
I loved It!!!
Thank You.
This is a great story of hot motherfucking...
by a gifted writer still in his 30s. The commenter who wrote "nit-picking" is right--I don't appreciate readers who complain about some trivial grammatical or spelling mistake. In this excellent story, Tim is a good-looking well-built boy--his mom thinks he's "hunky"--and his mother's cunt leaks like a faucet when she looks him over. Mom especially likes the big bulge her boy's got in the front of his pants, and, sex-savvy lady that she is, she knows that what's lurking in her boy's pants can do her a world of good. It doesn't take Tim long to get with the program, he's been real interested in his mother's mommy-hole for quite a while. The inevitable happens, Tim's fine fat cock comes together with his mother's warm wet twat and Tim unloads his young balls up the very same cunt he came out of. And Tim does it again and again, as the boy becomes a grinning, smirking young motherfucker and his mother a smiling, contented son-fucked mom.
Write some more
Good plot and very stimulating. However, it stretches credulity to imagine that Tina would not find a mother sitting high up on her son's lap with her dress bunched up, rather unusual. That their orgasm, so intense, should pass with but an undetectable whimper is too fantastical.
agonizingly sexxy
Wow. I still have a tent in my pants!
Write more!
Good story! It has the potential of having several hot adventures. I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the near future… Especially expounding
from the story
I feel like I have had a cold shower . just 2 stop like that. help
Pool side
Good storie I have read it Many times and always makes me cum hard
We all want more.
Fuck
FUCK ME, THAT, THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!
FANTASTIC
Story doesn't make sense unless the friend knows what's happened, but ignore the nit pickers. They're wrong as this is fantasia, not some english literary educational establishment.
Otherwise it's well written, the right length and ends at the right place , perfect cliff hanger.
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