Another chapter, I'm soooo pleased. Problem is I'm going to have to do some rereading to get the feel of the story again.
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Anonymous02/14/10
Very happy to see this story continuing. Please keep it up.
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Anonymous02/20/10
Wowza!
That sexual encounter was AMAZING!!! So hot and graphic. Loved it! Not only do I just love the sex in this novel but it has a great story line and character development. Quality writing is so hard to find on Lit so I'm thrilled to have found this series. Thank you! And more please! =)
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Anonymous03/10/10
Can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter. Wat is going to happen to the Moon Maiden.... with Duncan so close by.... Pls let us not wait too long!
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Anonymous03/22/10
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Please update soon, I can't wait to the next installment of this story!
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Anonymous04/07/10
pls update soon!
Have been checking your site every alternate day.... pls update soon!
The plot is involved and involving, the characters strongly drawn and the relationships complex and realistic. I'm not one to pressure for updates, but I'd like to encourage you to do so, as I'm eager to read on and think you could work this into a publishable romance novel.
Needs a bit of editing though for tense, punctuation and such, which I would be happy to do. I'm a freelance editor who can edit without interfering with your creative intent.
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Anonymous05/21/10
Can't wait for more...
This could easily become a novel... Can't wait for the next update!
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Anonymous07/08/10
This is a fantastic story!
This is a fantastic story!
WONDERFUL WORK!!!!I just read your entire series so far. Please dont keep us in suspense too long, .PLEASE tell me that youre going to wtite more
PLEASE tell me that youre going to write more... Can't wait for the next update!
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Anonymous01/16/12
Your stories are amazing so dramatic and the right hint of control without going over board love and please keep writing
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Anonymous11/04/16
Ronan Dissapoints
Ronan is a selfish, incompetent lover (fucker). Seriously, there is no excuse for him to hurt his willing wife. Even the earlier losses of control were pretty ugly, but he could sort of claim ignorance the first time. Although who rides his wife like a whore, experienced or not, and ignores screaming, blood and bruises. He does not deserve the moon maiden's blessing.
English
thanx for updating this story, at last!!! i hope its not a long wait before the next chapter!!!
woooohooooo
Another chapter, I'm soooo pleased. Problem is I'm going to have to do some rereading to get the feel of the story again.
Very happy to see this story continuing. Please keep it up.
Wowza!
That sexual encounter was AMAZING!!! So hot and graphic. Loved it! Not only do I just love the sex in this novel but it has a great story line and character development. Quality writing is so hard to find on Lit so I'm thrilled to have found this series. Thank you! And more please! =)
Can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter. Wat is going to happen to the Moon Maiden.... with Duncan so close by.... Pls let us not wait too long!
...
Please update soon, I can't wait to the next installment of this story!
pls update soon!
Have been checking your site every alternate day.... pls update soon!
Really enjoying this tale
The plot is involved and involving, the characters strongly drawn and the relationships complex and realistic. I'm not one to pressure for updates, but I'd like to encourage you to do so, as I'm eager to read on and think you could work this into a publishable romance novel.
Needs a bit of editing though for tense, punctuation and such, which I would be happy to do. I'm a freelance editor who can edit without interfering with your creative intent.
Can't wait for more...
This could easily become a novel... Can't wait for the next update!
This is a fantastic story!
This is a fantastic story!
WONDERFUL WORK!!!!I just read your entire series so far. Please dont keep us in suspense too long, .PLEASE tell me that youre going to wtite more
PLEASE tell me that youre going to write more... Can't wait for the next update!
Your stories are amazing so dramatic and the right hint of control without going over board love and please keep writing
Ronan Dissapoints
Ronan is a selfish, incompetent lover (fucker). Seriously, there is no excuse for him to hurt his willing wife. Even the earlier losses of control were pretty ugly, but he could sort of claim ignorance the first time. Although who rides his wife like a whore, experienced or not, and ignores screaming, blood and bruises. He does not deserve the moon maiden's blessing.
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