Drunken Harry

Well written and imaginative

I hate cocksucking sluts and cuckold husbands, but have to recognize the quality of the execution and that probably it was the best solution for Harry!

I didn't like this story very much!

This is not you usual fare.
It made me feel sorry for Harry.
In reality this would have never went down like this.
She should have told Harry right off the bat and Harry should have emasculated Ken. And put the fear into the rest of them.
Then worked their proplems out.
Thanks for writing!

Damn good job on this one....you just keep getting better man...

In Real Life...

Jana would have asquired a STD or two to pass on to Harry since she was getting gangbanged bareback. So much for loving Harry!

1*

I don't know why JPB would write such a stupid story since he is smart enough to know the story is not possible.

First, unless they are already are crazy, sex does not cause women to suddenly become sex crazy and lose control that up until that time they had.

Second, the moment Ken attempted to blackmail her she would call the police and the police would get a search warrant, and Ken would be arrested and sent to prison for blackmail and rape. The court and the police would not release the photos. However, they would be used as proof that Ken was guilty of rape and blackmail. Likely Ken would go to prison for at least 20 years. No way, no how would Ken risk 20 years in prison for a piece of tail. Without any doubt,JPB knows that and yet he writes a stupid story that he knows is impossible.

I don't know why DWornock would write such trash....

He has to be smart enough to realize that it is just a story. When you read fiction, you have to have a willing suspension of disbelief. Not everything you read has to be plausible or even possible. Hell, JK Rowling made a mint off of a fantastical tale of magic and mayhem. Most people would say it couldn't be real, but people loved the story anyway. Same with most fiction.

I know, there are stories some like, and stories that some don't like. But Dwornock should be smart enough to know that it's just a story and not over analyze it...then again, I'm probably giving too much credit to Dwornock for being smart.....

Brilliant. Hilarious too.

May include the best line in Lit ever, " ...I heard "replaced the tub with a tub with water jets and tore out..." and I faded out again. The bedroom door opened and I heard "...master bedroom fully equipped with the best cocksucker and piece of ass in the state. Moving on we co..." and he (or I) faded out again."

As LW satire this is an underappreciated gem. 5*

The best part?

Was that Harry had hired a PI. And the PI had hours and hours of not only her cheating and using her body to close the contracts. He also had video of the men beating Ken. When Harry's lawyer got done, the Company was in bankruptcy, the men and his soon to be ex wife were in prison for a variety of crimes. Harry cleaned out the men and the Company in his Civil lawsuits and was retired to a tropical island before the jail house doors shut on the men and his now ex wife. Well played Harry!

NOTHING IS EVER THAT GOOD

to lose yourself and your pride,. TK U MLJ LV NV

Shit!

This is a classic example of JPB bullshit! The score says it all. Too bad there is no 0 score.

Except guys like Ken had lots of copies

And he destroyed her when he made sure everyone possible got a copy of her in action that he had in Safe Deposit box at the bank. So in the end, everybody lost big time. Even dumb old Bert spent years in jail for beating Ken. Really one of your worst stories Bob.

Not Sure

On the one hand Harry got rid of a cheating cunt (granted it started out as blackmail, but she ended up liking it!) and corporate whore, on the other he got to keep tapping her ass!