Now I too would love to know who Naughty time is! Very good story! I enjoyed it all.
Just wanted to say that I love this series. I have read some of your other submissions and you are a very talented erotic author. I look forward to more of your stories.
come on his mother is naughty time. we learn that when the first banana went missing. his aunt wasn't even around yet.
I loved the concept, the setup, but the end was completely rushed. Still love the author. I'll be back to read your next one.
Good plot development and characters, though would love to see it go even further.
Very much enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing. Please continue..you certainly have talent. All the best
and then let it just fall over the cliff. all fizzle, no bang.
Glad you saved the best for the last chapter! Thank you!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! orBack to Naughty Time Ch. 04 orMore submissions by Many Feathers.
[...]
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Posting...
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Naughty Time Ch. 04:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Preview comment
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to Many Feathers:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Send feedback
Sending...
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Username:
Password:Forgot your password?
Security code:
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save Cancel
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.
Close
English
Excellent!
Now I too would love to know who Naughty time is! Very good story! I enjoyed it all.
Great Story.
Just wanted to say that I love this series. I have read some of your other submissions and you are a very talented erotic author. I look forward to more of your stories.
come on
come on his mother is naughty time. we learn that when the first banana went missing. his aunt wasn't even around yet.
Good concept, poor finish
I loved the concept, the setup, but the end was completely rushed. Still love the author. I'll be back to read your next one.
Very nice!
Good plot development and characters, though would love to see it go even further.
Excellent story
Very much enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing. Please continue..you certainly have talent. All the best
you build, build, and build
and then let it just fall over the cliff.
all fizzle, no bang.
Another fun story!
Glad you saved the best for the last chapter! Thank you!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Naughty Time Ch. 04 or
More submissions by Many Feathers.