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Naughty Time Ch. 04

byMany Feathers©
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by Anonymous

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by Tool_guy02/11/10

Excellent!

Now I too would love to know who Naughty time is! Very good story! I enjoyed it all.

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by dluvstoread02/11/10

Great Story.

Just wanted to say that I love this series. I have read some of your other submissions and you are a very talented erotic author. I look forward to more of your stories.

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by silvertoe02/11/10

come on

come on his mother is naughty time. we learn that when the first banana went missing. his aunt wasn't even around yet.

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by hpaft02/11/10

Good concept, poor finish

I loved the concept, the setup, but the end was completely rushed. Still love the author. I'll be back to read your next one.

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by Archimedes5903/22/11

Very nice!

Good plot development and characters, though would love to see it go even further.

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by Fantasy116606/13/11

Excellent story

Very much enjoyed the story. Thank you for sharing. Please continue..you certainly have talent. All the best

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by rightbank08/26/14

you build, build, and build

and then let it just fall over the cliff.

all fizzle, no bang.

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by TSreader05/03/16

Another fun story!

Glad you saved the best for the last chapter! Thank you!

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