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*****
Very nice.
More
Can't wait to read more. !
Go for it.
I realy liked it. For some reason it seems real.
Love it ... I can't wait to read more . So get to writing !!!
Loved it!
Great start! Already love the characters and the storyline. (Maybe a bit longer though) I will be looking for the next part, please dont let us wait to long!
Good start!
Love building between two friends is a theme I enjoy reading! I'm interested in knowing where the story is going...
Please continue
Good start. I cant wait to see where you take this.
I like it
I like where this story is going.
They both have feelings for each other, but are afraid to let each other know how they feel
I hope that they don't take long to be honest to each other.
nice start!
so far so good im excited to see what happens next =) hurry up with the next chapter!! :P
I like the start of this!
I really hope you continue. I am feeling this story. Great start.
:)
Great start. Im looking forward to the rest.
**lilmami07**
like it
really great start, keep going I am looking forward to next chapter.
Wow
except for a few differences, this reads just like my relationship with my best friend.
Update please
please finish the story. so far so good:)
Where is the Rest????
Hey, this was a good beginning, but don't stop there!!!
Nyeesha
Again
This needs to be lengthened in order for it to have justice done to it. Get it cracking and finish this story :>)
Hello!!!!
Please tell me you are going to finish this story, THIS YEAR!
I know, I know...
I know I've made people wait way too long for the rest of this story. A lot of stuff has happened since I have posted this first chapter, but I am about to have a break and start back writing on it again. I have it all in my head, I just have to get it typed out and submitted. So, hopefully, in the next couple of weeks, I'll start posting some more chapters and going from there.
Not to be impatient, but...
I guess I am impatiently waiting for more :-)
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