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A good start
An intriguining start,I hope the sequel is on the way.
not much to judge by
Would have liked more of story.
Nice Twist.......
Not the typical IR relationship usually seen on Lit -- so that's a plus right out of the gate. Nice start, looking forward to see what happens next.
Hmmmmm.....WAAAAAAY TOO SHORT!!! MORE PLEASE
Nice start, but...where is the rest? I guess I am spoiled because I expected at least 2 or 3 pages. I want to know more about Malik, who appears to be an Arab, and more about Salina, who appears to be African-American. I love the combination of this Interracial Romance. It is a nice change. So, what happens next....?
Good start
Please don't keep us waiting too long for the update. Good work!
Whre is the rest?
Where is the rest?
I love it so far. I am waiting(not patiently though) for the rest of it.
Please update soon.
FINALLY!
SOMETHING DIFFERENT!!! THANK YOU!! OMG! I swear I was beginning to get bored with the same type of couples in this category and then I came across this beautiful beginning of a story. Loved it so far. Keep up the good work!
Totally agree!
I agree with Anon at the bottom there. . And great start. I'd love to see where it goes.
Good start, but need a little more...
It was a good start, indeed, and I am interested to see where things go. Oh, and one thing... I believe you meant to use the word "decent," as in good, proper, modest, socially correct, etc.--not "descent," which is to go down... You did that three times, I believe. Just wanted to make you aware. Nice job, overall. I'll be looking for the next installment.
:-)
finally worked up the courage to post the story BB? :-) .....you already know what I think of the story!!!
More please, dont keep us waiting!!!
Looooove it
Im glad to see something new too. Cant wait to read the rest and now the title has that tpain song stuck in my head lol. Good job!
Liked it
A little short, but a good read. It is different from other stories I have seen. Can't wait to see the next chapter(s). Keep up the good work.
Great
I am looking forward to the next installment
*****
Five.
Good
This has the beginning of a great story.
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