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Carry That Weight

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/28/18

Near perfect

Don't believe the naysayers. This is a near perfect story and the writing is so economical.

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by HikingThru04/14/18

Very nice

Well done, and tightly written.

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by sbrooks103x04/16/18

Late Thoughts

First, Jeff will never convince me that he wasn't trying to get Tom to pass out. Whether he had definite plans with Ashley, was hoping, or was just being mischievous, doesn't matter.

Second, even if Ashley wasn't planning on cheating, she did it, so no matter there.

The deadly part for me, is falling asleep in Jeff's bed! Putting the BEST possible spin on things, that she didn't plan on cheating, somehow didn't notice Jeff plying Tom with beers, and had some misguided sympathy for Jeff going without causing her to submit to his seduction. Once the deed was done, she HAD to get up, clean up, and go to her husband's bed!

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by argeelog04/20/18

Missing

Once again we are left without an explanation of the scenario of how Ashley and Jeff got to the point of screwing. "It happened" is worthless. Put some effort into describing the how. Otherwise the story is incomplete. Barely worth 3 stars.

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by etchiboy04/30/18

Took me a few reads before I got this.

At first I thought he wussed out. But in fact he is applying the ol’ reverse psychology trick. He’s guilting them into being true. Now, whether it will work in the long run I don’t know.

Jeff was definitely trying to get Tom out of the picture. And Ashley saw it, and didn’t stop it. It was definitely planned, IMO. It didn’t “just happen”. It was probably calculated by the two aldulters well before hand. One has to wonder if this was a one time thing, or it had been going on for some time. I think for some time. If not in fact, then in their minds. Probably emails and texts back and forth.

If this is not a one night stand, then the “guilt” deterrent probably won’t work. They are just to cold blooded about this for that to work for long.

Yeah, determining how/why they ended up in bed together would really detrrmine the outcome of this.

Still, a good story, and 4-stars.

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by Anonymous05/07/18

Took you a few reads because

you are an 'incel' or 'closet cuck' and that means 'not very bright.'

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by uncomonnerd05/23/18

thats it ?

where is the rest of the story ?

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by Anonymous05/23/18

What is wrong with some people?

I thought this was a great story. It always surprises me when you get these "serious" commenters who have no appreciation of your drive for humor and originality. I suppose a way of rationalizing things for them would be to point out that the world is full of all kinds of people, and an author is free to write about any of them, rather than always sticking to the same assumptions about people's psychology for every story. (To put it scientifically, the individual variation in a species is what gives evolution material to work on). An author should be free to push reality some to make some satirical comment as well, which you often do splendidly. While I'm putting in how much I appreciate your stories, I should add how I've appreciated how you don't pad them on and on with endless information about how people met, details of their business or engineering or military dealings, and so on. A lot of the stories on the site unfortunately accumulate page after page with way overwritten, largely irrelevant material, and it seems to me the problem has been getting worse. Anyway, thanks for a great story, among the many you have done.

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by Anonymous06/03/18

2-Stars! I did not like it at all - and I am never this critical!

Kak story! (Kak is Afrikaans for Shit!) 2-stars because the delete one-star!

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by Anonymous06/25/18

WTH?

I like most of your stories, but this one, as written, makes no sense. Is there a part 2?

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by Anonymous06/25/18

Kind of a focus piece, no?

The moral of the story is that actions speak louder than words, and Ashley's and Jeff's actions demonstrate complete contempt for Tom, their marriage, and themselves. They acted like two bottom feeders. Now they will endure the scrutiny of Tom, and Agnes, where ever they go and whatever they do, perhaps for years. Why would Jeff try to get Tom drunk if he hadn't already planned to fuck Ashley, with her advanced agreement? Acting with such confidence and arrogance, it could hardly have been the first time.

Of course the marriage will fail. Ashley lacks the moral and ethical fiber to withstand the scorn and contempt that Tom now feels toward her. She will try, maybe for years, but will eventually give up. She will divorce Tom once the kids are old enough to cope with the breakup. She will tell Tom the divorce is to set them both free from the prison of guilt, shame, and regret they both now live in. Tom will be grateful, and will now be able to make public the true love relationship he started behind Ashley's back. Wouldn't it be rich if that love was with Amber, Jeff's wife?

A well written if frustrating story. Thanks for your time and effort.

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by Anonymous07/04/18

Wimp

What a wimp.Instead of divorcing Ashley,he tells her to be discrete when she is fucking someone he is. certifiable

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by Anonymous07/21/18

GREAT STORY

I don't believe this was the first time for them to cheat. Just too much planning involved. Thank you for your work.......Frog308

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by Anonymous08/04/18

Good and different story line

But I would like you to write a follow up story maybe set two years later. I know it would be just as good. 5 *'s!

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by Anonymous08/07/18

Where is the rest of the story?

I dont agree with your heroe's approach. Not sure if he's a wimp or if, as his wife says, he's just trying to toture her. In any case the story is unfinished.

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by Harddaysknight08/07/18

Those looking for more of this story

can check out https://www.literotica.com/s/carry-that-weight-bea st-of-burden which is a sequel to this story written by DFWBeast. It is well written. That's all I've got for you.

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by DoNotPassGo08/23/18

I agree with HDK

DFWBeast's sequel is every bit as good as the original!

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by Harddaysknight08/23/18

This is all I wrote, or will write on this story, but

if you want to read a continuation, check out DFWBeast's sequel. It is very well written. This is the link https://www.literotica.com/s/carry-that-weight-bea st-of-burden

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by Anonymous09/19/18

1* Wimpy Cuck Crap

Wife in bed with lover and husband pukes. Cuck author.

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