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Carry That Weight

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/28/18

Near perfect

Don't believe the naysayers. This is a near perfect story and the writing is so economical.

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by HikingThru04/14/18

Very nice

Well done, and tightly written.

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by sbrooks103x04/16/18

Late Thoughts

First, Jeff will never convince me that he wasn't trying to get Tom to pass out. Whether he had definite plans with Ashley, was hoping, or was just being mischievous, doesn't matter.

Second, even if Ashley wasn't planning on cheating, she did it, so no matter there.

The deadly part for me, is falling asleep in Jeff's bed! Putting the BEST possible spin on things, that she didn't plan on cheating, somehow didn't notice Jeff plying Tom with beers, and had some misguided sympathy for Jeff going without causing her to submit to his seduction. Once the deed was done, she HAD to get up, clean up, and go to her husband's bed!

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by argeelog04/20/18

Missing

Once again we are left without an explanation of the scenario of how Ashley and Jeff got to the point of screwing. "It happened" is worthless. Put some effort into describing the how. Otherwise the story is incomplete. Barely worth 3 stars.

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by etchiboy04/30/18

Took me a few reads before I got this.

At first I thought he wussed out. But in fact he is applying the ol’ reverse psychology trick. He’s guilting them into being true. Now, whether it will work in the long run I don’t know.

Jeff was definitely trying to get Tom out of the picture. And Ashley saw it, and didn’t stop it. It was definitely planned, IMO. It didn’t “just happen”. It was probably calculated by the two aldulters well before hand. One has to wonder if this was a one time thing, or it had been going on for some time. I think for some time. If not in fact, then in their minds. Probably emails and texts back and forth.

If this is not a one night stand, then the “guilt” deterrent probably won’t work. They are just to cold blooded about this for that to work for long.

Yeah, determining how/why they ended up in bed together would really detrrmine the outcome of this.

Still, a good story, and 4-stars.

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by Anonymous05/07/18

Took you a few reads because

you are an 'incel' or 'closet cuck' and that means 'not very bright.'

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