by My I
Hmm, okay, this was certainly a different take on a time-worn theme. But I liked the writing style, and how it made an interesting point about possibilities when the path of a man and a woman cross.
Very well, I might add. I expect there'll be a bunch of, "Why didn't I think of that?" from readers. Count me in there too. I'm still chuckling and saying thank you for the amusement ride.
And very well done, too!
The last line, though-- I don't think it's even necessary.
I disagree. Andy must justify his inaction due to his lack of confidence some way. The sour grapes defense is always easiest to swallow.
My_I
That's the story in the mood of this painting.
Sadly, too close to the truth.