homeNon-Erotic PoetryFrom the StartPublic Comments

All Comments  for

From the Start

byStryderthorongil©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by newbiebabe02/27/10

Nicely stated...

What a nice way to put into words what has been so hard for me to verbalize... a relationship that is somewhat vaporous but oh, so real to the heart.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by IrishSprite03/03/10

I like this one alot. Feelings we all have put so nicely into words

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by ItsMegan03/12/11

It's wonderful

I felt every line of this.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to From the Start  or
More submissions by Stryderthorongil.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel