All Comments on 'On Three'

A mindless story that is poorly told. anon jerry

life is like that sometimes. You can find yourself in the most odd situation, yet it'll be completely arousing. I hope you find more ways to explore similar themes/situations.

I like your stuff, well done.

Erotic and funny

Thank you

Loved this until the last paragraph. Sorry, but that ending was terrible! It was just getting good! Go back and finish it! lol

Omg, I was so willing him to sink in deep into her pussy by accident of course. Or even a nibble of those titties. That got me teasingly wet. Good story.

Omg, I was so willing him to sink in deep into her pussy by accident of course. Or even a nibble of those titties. That got me teasingly wet. Good story.

Beautifully written. I so wanted her to 'accidentally' rock forward right onto him. Very hot. Keep writting

Well written piece, very well paced and exciting

I've actually read this a couple of times over the years.

That said the ending is very frustrating, not because of the lack of sexual release that the story seems to be building to (though that would have been nice) but because of the abrupt ending.

Last paragraph comes out of no where and ends an otherwise wonderful tale with no resolution of any kind.

This could just as easily have fit in humour, it's pretty funny at times.