Still a little stilted, formal - but I'm getting interested.
Straight to the point. If I were talking to you on the phone, I'm not sure I could accept all those instructions. Karen must be really desperate to be controlled.
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Interesting -
Still a little stilted, formal - but I'm getting interested.
You don't mess around.
Straight to the point. If I were talking to you on the phone, I'm not sure I could accept all those instructions. Karen must be really desperate to be controlled.
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