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As usual a well written story
JPB is one of the better writers on this theme, but his take is not popular with the more emotional members of the audience! Luckily, he could care less! He writes for fun and not adulation. Keep coming up with new ideas!
Good, but
I usually either love or hate JPB's stories, but this one kind of left me in the middle, the ending was somehow unsatisfying. Just seemed a total waste to blow off a loving relationship and future for gang bangs, no matter how good they are/were. Gotta admit the twist with Gail was unexpected though!!!!! So....hot story, but wish it could have ended differently, wish she could have got her head back on straight and he could have forgiven her...oh well, not my story.
Average story for JPB
Occasionally the writer comes up with some good stories, this one is just an average story for him.
As always, well written
Another good story from a prolific writer. Thanks for the good read.
As you story title read "He was warned"
I think he would have been pretty devastated after 26 years of marriage.
I would be!
I do not know how she could throw it all away! That isn't love.
After his wife's admissions he was left pretty much with no choice,
just devastating!
Since she is already on the back side of 50, with her looks already on the slide I can only hope in the end she dies lonely for all she has is empty sex and gangbangs. It won't be long when she won't even be able to get that.
If an STD doesn't kill her first, or some psycho she doesn't know murders, or maims her.
The sister twist was different. But who with any self respect would bang that nasty whore?
Thanks for writing!
Unsatisfying
It's a nice little story and well written and realistic. It's not even surprising since the title says it all. There is no satisfaction because Marsha has a significant moral failing and effectively pays no price for it. Yes, she is divorced but that seems to mean nothing to her. Is she vicious in her actions? No. She has a weakness and gives in to it. But she then brushes off 26 years with her husband as meaningless and just moves into her slut life like she just changed her clothes. Maybe it's just a slice of reality but it is unsatisfying. Maybe, despite what the story says, it gives us a true sense of the value of her marriage. To be able to just discard it so easily tells us that it had little true value to her to begin with. Very sad, but he WAS warned. It's also sad and scary that someone could live a good life for over 20 years and then revert to behavior that was given up.
Interesting read, good writing but unsatisfying
Marsha action after 26 years of what she felt was a good marriage? WTF?
This is a Joke right? Husband is so outraged about the whore wife he decides to fuck his own sister?
even for a piece of shit like JPB this is a sub human moronic story
da
You blew this oone wide open from good to crap.
Very Sad, such a sad story
To throw away 26 years of marriage for a few hours of pleasure, meaningless pleasure... Marsha will wake up one day and realize what she threw away, but it is already too late.
Well Bob:
Not one of your best but I liked the ending.
Kick ass and fuck the sister.
married 26 years
so I rated it 1*
If you write shit,,,,,
YOU get rated shit scores!!!!!
Sigh
TECHNICALLY I suppose it's a LW story...technically.
Damn it Bob!
you cant fuck your whore wife
but he could fuck his whore sister, not that's what you call a twisted story
Can't find the trees for the cheaters
So he can't stand what his wife is - a slut. Yet he can not only fuck a married woman, but commit incest to boot? There wasn't a decent person among them. BAH!
Damn
Strange fucking tale. I was totally on the husband's side until the end. By fucking his sister it turned him into the same low-life creature that his ex-whore cunt cheating wife and his skank sister. As far as I can see all have wasted their lives.
Oh No!
I agreed with Harry! I must be sick.
Fucking not on dude.
Put it in incest. By the way was the sister hot. She must be a slut - and I like sluts. 3*
Somehow it seems...
...your stories lose more and more quality. Okay, I acknowledge that it must have cost you a lot of energie to at least let him get out of the mess without being too much of a cuckold. Letting him fuck his sister and having him tolerate all that fucking-around lets him lose quite a bit of pride....
Wasted too much time reading this.
Started as if things would be on the up and up. Turned out lower than whale shit.
DUH
A very sick story,
Not happy that he can't fuck his wife
But he can fuck his sister! Good right until the end and then you threw the spanner wrench into the mix. I will say this Bob - you know how to piss off the readership!
Another JPB ending!!
I was ready to call for excommunicating the sister. Do we think sis will tell the ex?
Why doesn't Bob have to use tags?
Really?
What you decide not to put the energy into writing the ending and this is what you shitted out instead?
So he IS a pervert!
Just an incestual one. I get that he doesn't want to have anything to do with Marsha. But why would he have anything to do with his sister? Isn't she exposing him to the same diseases that his wife did? And for christ's sake - it's his sister! And he gets a charge out of that relationship? Wait until someone outs them. Talk about a disaster. And why would he leave it to Marsha to tell the kids why their marriage imploded? Not a good choice. Bad Bob, BAD!
Why was he!
He couldn't accept her cheating so she got kicked.
I can see getting the drop on his so called friends he asked to look out for him and warn him if she screwed around with others but, he did nothing to his SISTER!
Then he turns around and cheats on his brother in law with his own sister?
Like the bird in the pile of shit in the wintertime warms up and start to sing and gets eaten. So telling his friends about his wife was like being in a pile of shit, and with his warnings (like singing in the pile of shit) helped him alright. Why was he upset, he already knew what she was going to do and she didn't change. The people he thought were friends changed with the exception of his SISTER!
Why was he upset that she was the true round heeled slut she told him she was.
After divorcing her he looks at his flabby body and nearly throws up.
Then he works out gets in shape and starts screwing his sister pot calling the kettle black. Mother of his child gets blamed for his getting out of shape. Could she have mentioned he was looking bad and undesirable, yes! Did he just want to screw his sister from the beginning, YES! Could he have gotten in shape for her, Yes!
She manned up and asked for the divorce first, because she didn't want to cheat anymore so why was he upset!
He got to screw his SISTER while hanging horns on his BIL even though BIL knew and accepted his own wife as a round heeled slut,
Seems he was the SNAKE in this story.
Also is this story in the wrong section brother having sex with sister! (Incest taboo)
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