by Calia
this story would have been a very good read if u hadnt used so many different and confusing terms for the same things. it was annoying to read but the idea of the story is good.
Yes, I see your point. My goal was to use as many Evony terms as I possibly could in the story. I feel it would have lessened its impact had the same terms been used over and over. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!
Difficult TO read WITH so MANY words IN all-CAPS.