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Love in the time of Evony

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/18/10

odd....

this story would have been a very good read if u hadnt used so many different and confusing terms for the same things. it was annoying to read but the idea of the story is good.

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by Calia02/18/10

Fair comment

Yes, I see your point. My goal was to use as many Evony terms as I possibly could in the story. I feel it would have lessened its impact had the same terms been used over and over. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!

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by Anonymous02/23/10

HILLarious!

thanks for the entertaining read.....

Lady CeNedra server 83

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by Anonymous01/20/16

why so many capital letters?

Difficult TO read WITH so MANY words IN all-CAPS.

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