All Comments on 'To Be Transformed..or Not? Ch. 06'

I thought the first 2 chapters set up the story decently, but the later chapters feel rushed. There are also editorial items to take care of as this post definitely has a large number of grammatical errors. And finally, I can see how Alicia might be young and use slang, I wouldn't expect that from a 520 year old vampire. Don't let this discourage you from writing, but it's better to find and editor and post after longer periods of time than ones with mistakes and hurried plot lines.

i am really sorry... this chapter wasnt even supposed to be submitted...it was a total accident. i didn't even realize that this was already posted until today morning and by then it was too late. so, forgive me and i assure everybody, the following chapters will be a better read.

I can't speak for everyone but the reason I didn't comment on the previous chapters is because I'm always in a rush to read the next chapter. Its not because I didn't like it. . I love the story so far, i have no problems wit it. Great stuff.

more please.

Please continue!!! More!! More!!

i agreew with the two previous comments

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i have read each chapter and thought you may get sick of the same comments being posted

i dont feel this story has been rushed and am looking forward to the next instalment

A full 5 stars all the way. I just read the series and i have to say that you have to write more. leaving your readers hanging like that and with so many directions to go in. OMG. excellent story writing, please continue.

Please don't stop ....

loving this story..... keep going :)

Oh My God! Oh My God! Oh My God! i really love this series so please dont stop. i was so upset with th cliff hanger at the end though i know why you did it... because i will deffinatly be reading the next chapter. CANT WAIT! please submit it soon.

Oh PLEASE don't stop with this story!! I wanna know the rest!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

keep it up..i lyk it

I don't usually read series on here but I started yours and I love it. Please keep them coming.

TO b frank i love the sex parra. the best