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great story
loved it... sure it was eerie but it sticks in your mind...
NICE!
Love the ending!
I'm happy to see the twist, the big burly hung guy is the wimp and the regular, nerdy guy gets the girl. Methinks that some of those "manly" men protest a little too much sometimes at their masculinity.
Fantastically Twisted
A nice twist on an old classic! Normally this isn't my kind of story, but I had to appreciate the writing on this one.
Yowza!!....
....Be really careful what you wish for!!!-great short, author!
Well, that was a trip
Nicely done. Writing was excellent. The contrast between husband and lover was a nice touch. Many thanks.
Wow! That would suck!!!
Awsome! Totally horribly awsome. I'm sorry that happened. I guess enough was enough!
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