All Comments on 'Cousin at the Lake'

by dakota_style_1975

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Been there !

Did the opposite with my first cousin ; I went down on her and she loved it as much as I . Unfortunately she lived in lower England and I in Scotland and we never had the chance to do more but we did love one another deeply for many years .

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
kissing cousins

I had lots of good sex from cousins on my mother's side. One was extended and another was one long night... i just love cousins....cousin stories... i really find them erotic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
dumb

why would they do it in the car in the middle of winter and no reason ginven for doing it now why not before they left or at the party rushed and unrealistic do a rewrite and use a good editor

Johnny_boy95Johnny_boy95almost 11 years ago
Slow

It was a decent story. I could feel the love there. It's kinda boring tho and could use more detail too. Just add more details to the sex and love and give it more of a flow and I think you just might have one hell of a story on your hands. :) Wish you luck in future writings!

WomanOfSecretsWomanOfSecretsabout 8 years ago

I feel it to be short, it was nice i like it but it was short and fast but its okay nonetheless keep it up and hoping to read another chapter of this short story,

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