by dakota_style_1975
Did the opposite with my first cousin ; I went down on her and she loved it as much as I . Unfortunately she lived in lower England and I in Scotland and we never had the chance to do more but we did love one another deeply for many years .
I had lots of good sex from cousins on my mother's side. One was extended and another was one long night... i just love cousins....cousin stories... i really find them erotic
why would they do it in the car in the middle of winter and no reason ginven for doing it now why not before they left or at the party rushed and unrealistic do a rewrite and use a good editor
It was a decent story. I could feel the love there. It's kinda boring tho and could use more detail too. Just add more details to the sex and love and give it more of a flow and I think you just might have one hell of a story on your hands. :) Wish you luck in future writings!
I feel it to be short, it was nice i like it but it was short and fast but its okay nonetheless keep it up and hoping to read another chapter of this short story,